|Reviews for Last Time|
| RockLobster8994 chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
i liked how the song meshed with the story, but the song was written by The Who.
| 11111111111101 chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
hey, this is the person off youtube that said they wanted a link to your story :)
i LOVED it. it was extremely well-written; I think you captured Itachi's thoughts and wrote them down perfectly.
it's so sad TToTT
if it were "behind black eyes" then it would be the perfect song for him...of course then it would sound like he got beat up XD
"behind red eyes"? then it sounds like he's a demon or evil or something. of course that was kind of what he was going for in his act...
but we can just say the "blue" part isn't literal and just means he's sad. XD
i love it though, seriously. 3
| oxygen deprived chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Are you sure sad stuff isn't your forte? I think you need to edit that thought.
The song really fits Itachi, except the blue eyes.. It's actually as if it was written for him(except for the eyes, again).
| Neko chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Wow, this story was really good, and the song really does fit Itachi so well. I still cry every time I read Itachi's last words. Poor Itachi.
| The Lady Massacre chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Really good. You made a few spelling mistakes here and there, but that's about it. Great job, and it did fit Itachi really well. :D Thanks for joining the community, by the way. I apreciate it :)
| Rhyjle chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
Good...very fitting indeed...I have to say I agree with it...and I cried too when I read the part where Sasuke had been reminiscing on the past after Madara told him everything...whether it was the truth or not...I think what remains true still is the fact that Itachi did care for his brother in more ways than one...perhaps what could be questionable from Madara's story is about the nine-tailed fox but i do believe that what he told Sasuke about Itachi is not a lie...don't you think so? Anyway, forgive me for babbling such things...I just love the brothers and I felt sorry for what had become of them...good fic though...you picked the right song for it...
| Aergiia chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Are you sure sad stuff isn't your forte?
Are you sure you're sure?
Cuz I actually teared up... ;_;
- Wingless Fallen Angel
| SuberXxXDuperXxXFunMachine chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
that was increadbly good, i was tearing up, its like you pin pointed exactly what itachi would have been thinking at the time great fanfic
| empirical Dharma chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Not enough fics like this out there - tons of evil!Itachi, psycho!Itachi, !Itachi, but hardly any with his actual canon personality. So, I tip my hat to you; I was sufficiently depressed by your fic. And, yes, the song fits quite well. Really well. Especially the line: "And no one knows
What it's like to be hated
To be fated, to telling only lies"
That's his life after he left Konoha in a nutshell.
| KreideMausi chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
This made me cry...TT Good work.
| RiseOfTheDawn chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
Hmm, I have to admit i never really would have thought of this song as one that went with Itachi, but you've just proven me wrong. It meshed really well with the scene and just clicked. Very well written.
My favorite line was:
"It was as if I was born for this, born to hurt and kill the ones I love, to choose between family and duty."
I can't really explain why, but to me this seriously embodies Itachi to a tee. I give the whole thing a 5/5.
| cheyanna chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
that was great...u did a really good job.
id really like it if u read my story of itachi
just go 2: yukistar97./ to read it...if u like!like i said...u did a really good job...-crying-it was beautiful!
| Hinata C. Blue chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
i love it! and the song does kind of fit itachi, though i've always thought it suited naruto more back when he was a kid.
anyways great job!