Reviews for Escapade
Momma Laura chapter 20 . 1/16
I really tried to leave you a PM - loved the story but got distracted from time to time by the spelling errors or just the use of the wrong word...if you ever go back and edit this, please look up the difference between peak and peek. Listlessly and effortlessly. Wrap and rap. Good story though - would have liked to have seen where Edward's and Alice's new loves took them in the story.
jk chapter 14 . 2/19/2016
I wish alice would fucking die...that whore is no friend to bella
Ahyah chapter 20 . 2/13/2016
Guest chapter 3 . 3/26/2015
Leave it to her to find out he also loves to read and her favorite books.
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 8 . 1/3/2015
I don't think she has the right to feel jealous that Jasper is with someone who makes him happy. Not after what she and Edward did. I don't care if she was "following her visions." -_- XP And why the heck does Edward want Bella back now?! XP He better not plan anything that will hurt her or Jasper. . Like, seriously, if he wanted her so bad, he shouldn't have done what he did to her! Oh well. I hope things work themselves out and, another great chapter! :)
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 7 . 1/2/2015
I fangirled so hard during this chapter! Awwwi, it was just too cute! Seriously, and no, I don't think you had them get together too soon. With the new year feel to it, it was perfect. :) Especially since you had them help each other get through the emotional pain and had her interact with the others more before you had them kissing each other and becoming a couple (it was seriously cute and wonderful and amazing and just ahhh! Too perfect)! :3 I loved it. :D Great job! :D
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 6 . 1/2/2015
Okay, I'll admit, this chapter almost made me cry. XP That had to be so hard for her! Dx I'm glad Rose, Emmet, and Jasper were all there for her, though, when she told her dad. I felt sorry for him, too. Dx Hopefully everything will start looking up for her, soon! As always, great chapter. :3 I loved it all. :3
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 5 . 1/2/2015
Lol, the ending to this was cute. Haha. XD I loved how Bella told them to remove their hides from the house and follow her so they could tell her dad. Lmao. XD In fact, I love all the humor in this. I also think it's great how Bella and Rosalie are becoming closer (like sisters) and, I really liked how you had this start off with Rose and her thoughts. It's great how she thinks of Bella as her sister now and wants to protect her, she would make a great mom if she could ever have kids. :) This is a great story and, I absolutely love it. :3 It's very well written! And, I can't wait to see how Bella and Jasper's relationship turns out, I'm really curious.
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 4 . 1/2/2015
Aww, hopefully Jasper will be able to show Bella that she IS worth something, that she's worth A LOT, to him! I'm really irritated with Edward and Alice, like seriously? How could they hurt Bella and Jasper the way they did? -_- It was a totally selfish move! Dx Anyways, another great chapter. :) I loved it. :3
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 3 . 1/2/2015
Another great chapter. :) I liked how you had Rose and her talk, that was good! And I'm curious to see how their shopping trip will go? O.O This should be interesting! Lol. Also, Jasper's (and now Bella's room too), sounds completely gorgeous! I would love to have a room like that! :3 Emmet and Rose's room sounds super pretty as well. I love all the detail you have in this. It's great! :D I also enjoy how Emmet acts towards Bella, lol. Like a big, obnoxious brother, which is super cute and, his relationship with Rose is adorable, too. :3 They definitely belong with each other. :D The dancing scene was also done really well and, it was funny. Haha. I liked how you had Rose use her ability to attract Emmet so she could win the game, lol.
Great job! :)
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 2 . 1/2/2015
I really liked this. :) I also enjoyed reading them sit together in the clearing and the motorcycle scene was great, too. :3 I'm happy that they can seek comfort from each other, because dealing with this kind of emotional pain alone would be hard for the both of them, so at least they have each other. :) Great chapter. :D
XxWraptheNightaroundMexX chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
I love this! :) And.. my first thought of the whole situation is.. at least she found out BEFORE marrying Edward.. otherwise she would have been stuck in a marriage with him and THEN finding out that he was cheating on her with Alice.. that would have been ten times worse, I think. XP I mean, the whole situation is bad but, if she had been married to him? She would have had to deal with a lot more things, like divorce, and from what I've heard and seen, that's a hard process to go through! On another note, I hope her and Jasper will be able to help each other get through the emotional pain of this and, I also wonder what Edward and Alice will do, since everyone is upset with them? (With good reason, I might add)! Anyway, I think this is a really great start and, I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job. :)
Camille Whitlock chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
I love it keep going you are good don't let the bad reviews get you down or mad if it is that bad just remember their b***hes any way :)
Guest chapter 15 . 5/24/2013
Guest chapter 12 . 5/23/2013
Attacks with foam bricks and cream pies-because I can.
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