Reviews for A Surprise for Valentine’s Day
HoneyBear84 chapter 2 . 8/2/2017
Loved it, wud of been funnier if all 3 had been Pregnant lol
HoneyBear84 chapter 1 . 8/2/2017
does that mean they both got Sev pregnant?
cris chapter 1 . 1/12/2017
I love it
Jude Xue chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
Haha. Harry IS really a disaster when it comes to potions. xD Thanks for sharing !
Azrael Jinsei chapter 2 . 1/4/2015
Very sweet thank you for writing this
tainted-tash chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
very saucy
tainted-tash chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
I knew they would have a daughter
felicia2235 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
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TheDaemonLady chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
i have only a couple of comments on the pregnancy,

four five days into a pregnancy a child is nothing more than a few cells, it wouldnt have a heartbeat, i undersstand if you intended it to be different as it was a magical child, but maybe it should have been specified to make it clearer on th reader.

and secondly it seemed rather strange that severus didnt appear fatigued after the pregnancy? to be honest if i had attempted to push a fully grown foetas through a hole so small as that i would certainly be tired yes?

please dont think im critiquing you unneccissarily but i just felt you should know so as to make improvements on your general writing


adavisa chapter 2 . 4/18/2013
adavisa chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Loved it!
silbernewolfsfrau chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
i adore this one shot
absolutely love this pairing and there is nothing better than good mpreg :)
PhoenixPixie chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
harryhermionerw chapter 2 . 5/29/2012
This was great!

I kind of wish it was a little longer, the bit where Harry is withdrawing from Severus and Draco because who doesn't love a bit of angst?

Anyways, love it!
YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 2 . 5/24/2012
Of course, the smut is always the best part! I love this fic!
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