|Reviews for A Surprise for Valentine’s Day|
| Jude Xue chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
Haha. Harry IS really a disaster when it comes to potions. xD Thanks for sharing !
| Azrael Jinsei chapter 2 . 1/4/2015
Very sweet thank you for writing this
| tainted-tash chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
| tainted-tash chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
I knew they would have a daughter
| felicia2235 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
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| CainAJLBassen chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
i have only a couple of comments on the pregnancy,
four five days into a pregnancy a child is nothing more than a few cells, it wouldnt have a heartbeat, i undersstand if you intended it to be different as it was a magical child, but maybe it should have been specified to make it clearer on th reader.
and secondly it seemed rather strange that severus didnt appear fatigued after the pregnancy? to be honest if i had attempted to push a fully grown foetas through a hole so small as that i would certainly be tired yes?
please dont think im critiquing you unneccissarily but i just felt you should know so as to make improvements on your general writing
| adavisa chapter 2 . 4/18/2013
| adavisa chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
| silbernewolfsfrau chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
i adore this one shot
absolutely love this pairing and there is nothing better than good mpreg :)
| PhoenixPixie chapter 2 . 9/4/2012
I LOVED THE SMUT! so hot!
| harryhermionerw chapter 2 . 5/29/2012
This was great!
I kind of wish it was a little longer, the bit where Harry is withdrawing from Severus and Draco because who doesn't love a bit of angst?
Anyways, love it!
| YetAnotherJanewayFan chapter 2 . 5/24/2012
Of course, the smut is always the best part! I love this fic!
| Alysisaacs17 chapter 2 . 12/30/2011
I absolutly love you and your stories *Expesly this one* I havent found many 3somes as good as yours on here.
| Elfin69 chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
This was a terrific Valentines day one. Maybe you should do one where both Harry and Severus get pregnant from the chocolates.
| yaoilover6969 chapter 2 . 3/2/2011
should write more for story i loved it and i want to find out what happends so please write more.