Reviews for Surprise
MyRedvines chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
love it
Elizabeth Mary Holmes chapter 1 . 4/3/2011

I loved a lot this one-shot, and Alice's fantasm about a Jazz in uniform is a bit mine too. So may I ask the favour to translate it into my language,French. Of course, I'll credit you as the writter and I'll translate you the reviews.

E.M. Masen
Lansara chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Can you say T*E*A*S*E?
deleteteled chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Ms.TamborineMan chapter 1 . 2/23/2010 cute. . luved it!
rockstar87 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
right lemons u would be good at it! ;)
abcdefedcba chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
Lol :P
Stephycats7785 chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
That was totally sweet. I mean its cute how you write silly but meaningful moments between them. Your a great writer.
the evil little pixie chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
thats like so like romantic
maggiekb chapter 1 . 7/21/2009
so freaking sweet! i love jalice
victorionious chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Hehehehe! That got a giggle out of me. Or two. Or two hundred.
GryffindorAtHeart chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
HEHE. Loved it. Alice and Jasper rock!

And I love the uniform idea and Alice's line 'I figured you would have more fun taking it off me than the hanger.'

Made me laugh out loud. x
Inscribed-on-my-heart chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
this is real good! very Jasper and Alice, and I love the fact that Jasper just assumed Alice was shopping, I think that Alice could do with a trip to "Shopaholics anonymous!
GingerMarauderette chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Cute! And I know how you feel... I don't write lemons either!

starkidpaige chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
So cute! I'm a sucker for good fluffs! ha ha!
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