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Guest chapter 6 . 6/14
So the fight with Pain was different then.
Steavatron chapter 1 . 5/19
Am I the only one who found it seriously wrong that Ino just KO'd him and decided to mind rape him for the information? That's gotta be like seven different kinds of illegal.

You can't just violate the sanctity of someone's mind without their consent.
Tenjo chapter 5 . 3/25
Your characterisation of Tsunade is a bitch. An idiot one at that.
Tenjo chapter 4 . 3/25
Another one who chooses a random word and writes it in romanised Japanese. Normally they choose ‘baka’ but you chose ‘onegai’, they are both gross either way.
Tenjo chapter 4 . 3/25
Again with the ‘splitting the chakra up evenly between clones’ trope.. that’s stupid. Because it’s working in percentages and fractions, not base values. Meaning Naruto should only be able to make four or five more clones than the average jōnin, as his chakra would go from 100% to 50 to 25 to 12.5 to 6.25 to 3.125 to 1.5625 to 0.78125 and so on. Now unless you’re trying to tell me he has several thousand times the amount of chakra a jōnin would, he should only be capable of making five or six clones before draining himself. But if we’re working with base values and say he has 1000 chakra and each clone takes 5, he still has 100 times more chakra than a jōnin (much more reasonable than thousands) but now he can make 200 clones while an average jōnin could make 2, which makes it being a forbidden technique viable but still allowing Naruto to make an obscene number of them.
david2299 chapter 13 . 3/8
I'll gladly adopt it and take it off your hands.
No ending chapter 13 . 6/9/2018
You should put that this is incomplete in your heading and change it's status too. It's an asinine thing to do to readers and for that I spit at you and curse you to read at least ten such pieces of crap that you've put out. jm
Turned crappy chapter 7 . 6/8/2018
It was going pretty well, but then you went and made Naruto a gay schizoid with multiple personality disorder. That was just a major disgusting thing to do. I think you're a bit twisted with the whole Hitomi thing ... some sort of fetish you have that you're playing out in this story. You need help. jm
hennessyswagg83 chapter 1 . 1/22/2018
This the story I've ever read EVER while that's an over exaggeration but still it is a stupid plot with nothing making sense to regular canon since every knew was the jinchūriki before Pein attacked and how was defeated with the canon version of the battle occuring
hennessyswagg83 chapter 4 . 1/22/2018
You have no concept of the mechanics of the Narutoverse that you should even explain jutsu in your story
hennessyswagg83 chapter 4 . 1/22/2018
You call yourself a Naruto writing if this is taking place after Pein's Invasion or even after Asuma's death then everyone know he's the Kyūbi Jinchūriki
WinterForSummer chapter 1 . 11/11/2017
Henge is physical
Trace Reading chapter 4 . 7/2/2017
Teuchi, kage bunshin, Rookie 9/Konoha 11, Pain (fuck those idiot fan translators for writing it as Pein)

cleared his throat hurriedly, or hurriedly cleared his throat...NOT cleared hurriedly his throat...

bleh.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
Henge is a physical transformation. I'm tired of repeating this simple fact.
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 13 . 3/1/2017
If you could tell me the direction you wanted to take this story in, I'd greatly appreciate it. This was a wonderful fic and I really enjoyed reading it :)
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