Reviews for Memories
U blew it chapter 7 . 9/23
Going so well and then you wrote this chapter. Terrible. Your attempt at reintroducing Naruto's father even though this whole story takes place WAY past the Kage Summit where Naruto knows of his family. And what's this crap about sealing Ino? Just wrecked what was a good ride. ~jsm
Axccel chapter 8 . 2/16
It would be nice if Naruto notices that the closeness he's having now is thanks to not giving in to hatred and anger with Ino. It vindicates his beliefs.
Axccel chapter 7 . 2/16
Meh, just tell the villagers there was an enemy threat and that Naruto and Ino confronted and defeated it. It's true, from an Obi-Wan point of view.
Axccel chapter 6 . 2/16
Or you could have gotten Neji to break the connection. If there is a connection, it is made of Chakra and so a Hyuuga could see it and use the Gentle Palm to break it.
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 13 . 12/30/2019
Aww that sucks. This was just getting good
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 8 . 12/30/2019
Ok so the whole thing in this chapter about Naruto meeting his dad in the seal is a bit far fetched given it’s supposed to be past the canon point where he did that already on the day he fought pain. Other than that I am liking this story
Cranky Monkey 699 chapter 1 . 12/29/2019
Ine thing I noticed with your fics that confuses me a bit is you don’t seperate story from notes in any real way. Might wanna try using italics, bold or even just a line break with a bold lable that says chapter end
Guest chapter 6 . 6/14/2019
So the fight with Pain was different then.
Steavatron chapter 1 . 5/19/2019
Am I the only one who found it seriously wrong that Ino just KO'd him and decided to mind rape him for the information? That's gotta be like seven different kinds of illegal.

You can't just violate the sanctity of someone's mind without their consent.
Tenjo chapter 5 . 3/25/2019
Your characterisation of Tsunade is a bitch. An idiot one at that.
Tenjo chapter 4 . 3/25/2019
Another one who chooses a random word and writes it in romanised Japanese. Normally they choose ‘baka’ but you chose ‘onegai’, they are both gross either way.
Tenjo chapter 4 . 3/25/2019
Again with the ‘splitting the chakra up evenly between clones’ trope.. that’s stupid. Because it’s working in percentages and fractions, not base values. Meaning Naruto should only be able to make four or five more clones than the average jōnin, as his chakra would go from 100% to 50 to 25 to 12.5 to 6.25 to 3.125 to 1.5625 to 0.78125 and so on. Now unless you’re trying to tell me he has several thousand times the amount of chakra a jōnin would, he should only be capable of making five or six clones before draining himself. But if we’re working with base values and say he has 1000 chakra and each clone takes 5, he still has 100 times more chakra than a jōnin (much more reasonable than thousands) but now he can make 200 clones while an average jōnin could make 2, which makes it being a forbidden technique viable but still allowing Naruto to make an obscene number of them.
david2299 chapter 13 . 3/8/2019
I'll gladly adopt it and take it off your hands.
No ending chapter 13 . 6/9/2018
You should put that this is incomplete in your heading and change it's status too. It's an asinine thing to do to readers and for that I spit at you and curse you to read at least ten such pieces of crap that you've put out. jm
Turned crappy chapter 7 . 6/8/2018
It was going pretty well, but then you went and made Naruto a gay schizoid with multiple personality disorder. That was just a major disgusting thing to do. I think you're a bit twisted with the whole Hitomi thing ... some sort of fetish you have that you're playing out in this story. You need help. jm
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