|Reviews for Memories|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/25
No ino I see all probable out comes, all probable paths, my death is the only true path to peace. (original ancient manuscript (time travel end) naruto))
| animelovingsociety chapter 12 . 1/22
When's the next chapter coming out, you can't just leave it there. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
| NineTailsOfEpic chapter 5 . 12/17/2014
Mind Walking is called 'Shintenshin no jutsu'
| XXxliaaxXX chapter 12 . 8/17/2014
So, it's been like 3 years or something since you last updated. I really like this story and are hoping you don't abandon it. Please continue.
| Rayne Arianna Maranochi chapter 12 . 7/28/2014
Honestly I'm happy he died, I say good ridence. Anyway plz continue if possible.
| Thespurgin chapter 12 . 1/12/2014
moar? I'd hate to see this dead so suddenly...
| kooloowarrior chapter 6 . 1/7/2014
Wait minatos sealed himself twice? I'm confused
| X-elemental chapter 5 . 10/19/2013
Why use even japaneseglossary at all if you don't even have the words? Just write whole fic in english, or finnish, or whatever language you're writing it in. Even if you understand the romaji of relatively common words used herein it still breaks story.
| X-elemental chapter 2 . 10/19/2013
"In homes, the mats must not be laid in a grid pattern, and in any layout there is never a point where the corners of three or four mats touch."
...How did you know I'd lay them out to maximize that occurring?
| crazyrubsoff chapter 11 . 8/23/2013
regarding your piece about not reading the comic if Kishi makes Sasuke repent... Have you been reading the manga lately? Kishi does just that! STUPID! This is an interesting fic, though.
| Sak chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Good first chapter, a little confusing of when the time frame was at a particular moment, who was feeling what, but I'm a newbie so,,. Maybe my problem.
| RykOakwine chapter 12 . 6/9/2013
This is by far my favorite Ino/Naruto story on this site, in spite of being short, incomplete, and badly needing a proofreader.
Mainly because of the excellent job you did in showing Ino what Naruto's life was like before the time skip, your treatement of his loneliness, his 'sister' Homiko, and so on.
I loved how Ino came to accept Himeko, though it feels like you abandoned that part of your story without ever really exploring its possibilities. But at least you touched on the issues of loneliness, gender identity, legitimacy of an alter ego, and such.
An excellent story that had much potential that will never be explored, alas, but I can still enthusiastically recommend this to read. :-)
| Writing bunny chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
Good chapter. I like your version of Naruto's backstory. Fits nicely with canon and yet explains so much.
| lestibur chapter 12 . 4/7/2013
great history man, keep goin!
| MagicTrix17 chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
I liked this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.