|Reviews for A Time For Honesty|
| David chapter 14 . 11/23/2012
Really loved this story, and all your other ones. Please come back to fanfiction! I know its been years, but still come back!
| retropanda37 chapter 14 . 12/16/2010
Very enjoyable story! Your plot was intriguing throughout, and you worked in a lot of great elements. I especially liked the aspect of Sarah being a twin and reconnecting with her mother and sister. Definitely didn't see the ending coming, but I thought it was great! Best of luck with your novel :)
| Nick CHARAH chapter 14 . 9/20/2010
Well good luck with your book. It's been amazing reading all of your stories, two weeks, missing asset, CIA assassin and this of course have all been some of my favourite stories.
Although for the sake of clarity could someone tell me if what happened at the end of this story was that everything that happened in the hallucination actually came to happen...
| BloodBank chapter 10 . 9/20/2009
I'm realy enjoying it! A definite "yes!"
| aross93 chapter 14 . 6/20/2009
love the story! i was a little surprised about how the entire thing was a dream for Sarah but that fact made it 100 times more interesting, i am going to read the rest of your words and review as many as I can! great writing and word choice...A
| tennisgirl220 chapter 14 . 5/5/2009
OMG! my fav. this was the best i love love love the ending
| ChuckvsMyLife chapter 14 . 5/1/2009
Wow! I really enjoyed that! I seriously have never liked a story as much as I like this one! It is so well written, and I really did not expect that ending at all! Great job!
| offtackle46 chapter 14 . 4/29/2009
Ok, I did not see that coming at all. Fantastic ending to a wonderful story.
I am sorry that you are going to be leaving, but you leave behind a wonderful legacy of Chuck.
I wish you all the best in your writing career, and I will be watching for your books. I will be a dedicated fan.
| offtackle46 chapter 13 . 4/29/2009
Although I like this chapter better because it is back in my comfort zone with Chuck and Sarah, the overt assignment felt like a convienent fix to me. Was it meant to be that way?
I really enjoyed the short blurb on taking a shower together.
I see there is only one more chapter, so I am trying to figure out how you are going to bring things together in one chapter.
| offtackle46 chapter 12 . 4/28/2009
I had to read this chapter a couple of times. My initial gut reaction to it was to hate it.
In particular, I hated this line. “Sarah, married people cheat all the time. It’s just for us we will be doing something good because of it.”
It just does not ring true of the deep down Chuck. I know he has rebooted himself, but at the core, there are parts of him that can’t be rebooted. I think this is part of what people don’t like about Chuck’s getting superpowers in the finale. It feels like a core change to the character.
After reading it a couple of times, I began to see some of the nuances of what you wrote, and I think Chuck’s actions could have been an over compensation for not wanting to lose Sarah. I think I get where you are going, and I am happy with the ending of the chapter.
As usual, it is well written with a lot of information in one chapter.
| ersk4 chapter 14 . 4/28/2009
What a surprising and unexpected ending. I never saw that coming! Which made it all the more enjoyable!
| offtackle46 chapter 11 . 4/28/2009
Ok,I read the chapter way to fast, so not many details. I like the way you have integrated Sarah's family, and Graham is a good bad guy!
All I can say is Sarah sandwich! Doh. Tell me you weren't thinking it!
| offtackle46 chapter 10 . 4/28/2009
Oh come on, Kate. How could sleeping with Aren’t not be traumatic! I challenge Kate to sleep with him and see how traumatized she is.
I really enjoyed the conversation between Sarah and Kate. It was well written and flowed back and forth.
Pour over policies? Pure drudgery. She must want to really marry Chuck!
Whoa, you got me again, but I bet I am not as surprised as Chuck is! I am interested to see how you deal with her family. I don’t always like what is done with Sarah’s family in stories.
Another great chapter, and I think it is holding up.
| offtackle46 chapter 9 . 4/27/2009
“He knew how the General could be.” She needs to get laid. Wait. I got it. The General and Aren’t! I could do you, but then I have to kill you. Pure genius!
Oh man, I am blown away by their conversation. Sarah saying “Ask me, I’ll say yes” was like a hammer blow each time she said it. Bravo.
Interrupting Kate with the proposal caught me off guard, and then Sarah’s answer and Casey’s comment about making it a song. I ended up laughing so hard. Fantastic!
No way! Chuck is the boss! That is what changed! Brilliant. A chapter of suprises.
| Chuck.Sarah chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
Totally looking forward for the next chapter.