Reviews for the same broad strokes
bloody orgasm chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
Ohhh I'm a dude and that story got me all hot and bothered lol I would do Haku
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
what going to happen next

or

sequel
June.la.tw chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
That was good
whitebengal14 chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
aw... that was cute

i liked it. :D very nice little one shot looking thing there. ;P Like how you write too 3
shaedey chapter 1 . 6/21/2009
Not bad, sweet for a ficlet :)
KaiDoujinshiWorld chapter 1 . 2/22/2009
Hiyo! I like your story, therefore i shall review lol. I would probaly be jealous of haku too (Zabuza's hot. Im gonna add you to my favorites, cant want for your next story.

-Kai
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
WOW...This is a first...HAKU being the initiater...Did u know Haku was originally suppose girl?...Most ppl find it shocking...