Reviews for The Hunted and The Undead Dead
Guest chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
MORE CHAPTERS!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
Sorry I get really mad when I see bad grammar/spelling. On Chapter 2 you wrote '( Spelling is it rite? )' First of all there is not supposed to be spaces in the brackets, after 'Spelling' there was supposed to be a coma and you miss spelled right you spelled it as 'rite'. Sorry bad grammar/spelling is my pet peeve. Keep posting.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
real name is mary angela
HoNFan3 chapter 3 . 5/26/2010
I love this story! You have to keep writing! 333:D
hehe chapter 3 . 4/7/2010
hehehe its good i think u should put more of loren blake it
verdadero'amor chapter 3 . 2/16/2010
Just so u no...

Stevie Rea Stevie Rae

Shuanee Shaunee

Sister Mary Sister Mary Angela

Hahahah, lol; they all begin with S x

Luvedd the three chapters that you've written so far and im looking forward to the next one xx ;)
1world-traveler chapter 3 . 10/28/2009
good
Shana113 chapter 3 . 8/26/2009
wen is the next chapter gonna come out i wanna find out wat he wants to tell her ALONE tan tan tah

sorry i was bored i relly wanted to do tat
Shana113 chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
its good but i think u should do a grammer check next time cuz i think u made a couple mistakes
PadfootXmoonys-lovechild chapter 3 . 7/12/2009
shaunee

is hoe its spelt and can you tell us hw they kill blake

I realy hate him

and write more

it amazing

thnx
AwesomeAssassin chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
I like it, although the words seem too...scripted. Eg. Hes gone to look for food, clthing, water and other thing we might need.

Too scripted. Change that and it would be great!
Musical-Insomniac chapter 2 . 7/5/2009
OMG! These chapters are totally funny! Keep updating!
obsidianstar13 chapter 3 . 7/3/2009
This is really good! Update soon! Plz! Can't wait!
lillyrosenight chapter 3 . 6/8/2009
I hope you write more. This is really good.
lillyrosenight chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Oh lala... I can't wait for more. I hope this get's good.
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