|Reviews for Break|
| Hwikek chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Guess who I am!
I'm Hwikek by the way.
Pretty funny but, where is the love, by the Black Eyed Peas?
No one can match the falcon punch, except of course for Goku, he's frickin' amazing.
| StudentofDust chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
Oh Tomo... When will you learn?
Lol great job, especially with Tomo's reaction to Kaorin's entrance.
| Fuzzy Necromancer chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Tomo is pretty in character, but I think you overdid Yomi's irritability. I also don't think Kaori would talk like that to Tomo, since she's usually so meek.
| Leigh d chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
Awsome! Great story, I love the bit where Tomo gets punched in the face!
| AttackedByPersonalityThieves chapter 1 . 3/15/2009
I could definately see Tomo asking that. She had a point, too. You can't really judge. Good work. That was really funny.
| Weener1 chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Of course Kaorin knows how to breakdance! She's a beast at things like that~
Gods knows she has to have SOME hidden talent 8D!
| Chiyo And Osaka Fan chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Very hilarious and I love the twist at the end!
| ZeLoz -akaBill chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Well, at least everyone didn't spontaneously die at the end, like last time...