Reviews for In One Night
trearoos chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
Yikes! He WAS acting wierd!
Zazzles the Sandbird chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Hmmmm...pretty good. I like it. Good job on this. You might be able to go far with this kind of writing style. Interesting plot too. Nice.
OmensGurl chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
This story was wicked awesome hey do you think about making a sequel or something like that hey if you did I'll read it :)
GeoOgre chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
This was wonderful! Everything was in-character, and I liked the little bits of the Coach's craziness. Well done!
HeronsStorm chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Woah! I was NOT expecting the gun thing, interesting twist. I stayed enamored through the whole story. And the toy gun scene made me giggle. Good job!