Reviews for Over The Top
Guest chapter 28 . 2/3/2014
Well, dear lady, I have mentioned Halo over and over again, because it seems to just suit this story, especially since Edward refers to Jasper as angel, However, there is another song, rather old, probably before your time, that I really really love, it's called Annie's Song, (yeah, I know) by John Denver. Here are the words, if it seems to take up too much space I'll put the rest on the next review. "You fill up my senses like a night in a forest, like the mountains in springtime, like a walk in the rain, like a storm in the desert, like a sleepy blue ocean, you fill up my senses, come fill me again, come let me love you, let me give my life to you, let me drown in your laughter, let me die in your arms, come let me love you, come let me love you again."
rachel garber chapter 27 . 2/3/2014
Well, I guess I am getting boring by now, because the Halo song has been my standby throughout this sweet angsty but loving and lovely story. I am with you I love the idea of beautiful boys loving each other and managed to find a lot, many O/s but a few that really upset me, especially Power, which made me really hate Jasper and Your Biggest Fan, which made me really angry with Edward, so this is a lovely change. and relief *whew* wipes forehead. You've don't a great job with this story, I have chosen to keep the image of the canon Edward and Jasper in my mind as I read this, especially since, if the real men were gay, I think they would make an adorable couple, plus they both are very much interested in music, \
rachel garber chapter 26 . 2/3/2014
I never heard of camellias in that ight I know Victorians and even before that flowers had significance but didn't know that abtcamellias Yes, that bit about them being pink and being snet to a male partner, that does clinch things. loveee
rachel garber chapter 25 . 2/3/2014
No, I didn't; I figured he was having a dream and yeah, no he promised he never did and never will and as much as a dick Edward can be that is one thing I believe he would never do. That I can't imagine, although when I find out I am aure I will smack myself in the head a go, "of course"
rachel garber chapter 24 . 2/3/2014
Well, I am proud of Edward for manning up, and being honest but seriously, I really wanted to put my hand through the screen and sack him in the face for being such an unmitigated ass, as well as for being such a manwhore. Seriously, Edward? I guess the best that can be said for him is that he didn't bottom with them and didn't have them in his bed. Well, I am still having to listen to Halo, cause that is all that works for me until Edward gets his immature, hissy fit self together. So good chapter, very upsetting still, but I have hopes
rachel garber chapter 23 . 2/3/2014
We'll see how things go, glad Alice showed up hahaha, smexing mom and dad Cullen good chappie now to get to Jazz
rachel garber chapter 22 . 2/3/2014
Well, Miss Alice, suck it up dearie your brother is back in your parents house now, hope Edward doesn't see Jazz out with his friend from work good near ending, I mean it got good near the ending, some things heave to be ironed out
rachel garber chapter 21 . 2/3/2014
Omg, that is so amazing, dear heaven who expected this to turn out the way it did, that Edward totally misunderstood what his parents were saying to him poor Edward, poor Esme, poor Carlisle, and our sweet angel, how he must be so broken hearted. listening to Halo again and crying but happier now
rachel garber chapter 20 . 2/3/2014
I can only listen to Halo, that is my theme for this story so dear Edward has a breakthrough and what's Calisle? So, I've been crying so I hope they get back togeterh
rachel garber chapter 19 . 2/3/2014
Well, duhhh, the call was from Vancouver he did forget didn't he. Oh I got the not bottom, I didn't catch that he never allowed anyone in his bed "our" bed as it became.
rachel garber chapter 17 . 2/3/2014
Oh please don't let this end the way Your Best Fan, forget the exact title but it was a horrible breakup and I am still angry with Edward, oh please please let them not be finished. I'm so broken hearted. My poor boys, please let them back together
rachel garber chapter 16 . 2/3/2014
Well, I think Edward needs to listen to "Halo" and remember that Jazz is his angel, oh dear I had a feeling there would be some angst, my poor boys, my poor Edward poor broken boy, that was terrible but I guess that had to happn, they will get back together, I have faith in you
rachel garber chapter 15 . 2/3/2014
yeah, talk about drop kicking those jerks at the club, he was so cute, his jealousy peeking over his shoulder, yeah Bella doesn't necessarily belong in this story maybe as a friend, but not necessary. love it so much, probably keeping Edward from running into his father too soon into their relationship Nice dinner dateand loved the pictures
Guest chapter 14 . 2/3/2014
Wow, what is going on with Daddy Cullen, did Edward just cut the ties because he felt the embarrassment rolling off his parents like a tidal wave and just cut and run as soon as he could get away. One can't blame him, sure he kept his orientation secret, but again he was only a teenager, and they should not have made him feel like such a great disappointment. If he left rather than being pushed out, one can hardly blame him. This is kind of angsty, love the end though, Edward made his declaration of intent, "Mine"
rachel garber chapter 13 . 2/3/2014
Well, talk about throwing a bucket of water on Jasper's day, wonder what dear old dad has to say, hmmm can I throw him off the roof, no, shit, how about I throw something like the vase that held the flowers, oh right he took them home, you are no fun
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