|Reviews for Over The Top|
| Gubefan1980 chapter 7 . 7/7/2016
I remember the significance of the exchange of phone numbers and the promiseto think of each other while Edward is in Vancouver. Not giving anything away for new readers.
| Gubefan1980 chapter 4 . 7/7/2016
Okay, so I'm caught, third time so sue me, some stories just deserve more than one read.
| kinnik chapter 18 . 4/19/2016
| kinnik chapter 16 . 4/19/2016
Wow! I don't even know which one I fell the worst for. So heartbreaking...
| kinnik chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
Yes, the loft and the club definitely reminded me of Babylon, but it absolutely helped to be able to envision the entire scene. Well done. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.
| heartfortwilight chapter 1 . 3/31/2016
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| harrytwifan chapter 35 . 3/19/2016
Thank you for this lovely surprise! I will never forget this story.
| iheartcsinewyork chapter 35 . 3/9/2016
Holy crap on a cracker batman. I just spent the last five hours of my hump day reading about Edward and Jasper humping. And it was so very, very glorious. I couldn't resist the temptation to fall back into this beautiful rabbit hole.
I kind of did a lot of squeeing (totes a real word) and hand flailing (I'm a professional handflailer).
This story is one of the greatest (as evidenced by the thousands of reviews... Literally).
I will be sure to give your book a read as I'm sure it will be just as incredible.
Seven years. Hot damn. I truly remember this story vividly. It has always been one of my favorites and I was so tickled to re-visit it!
And now I'll probably dig back into Deep Dish!
A thousand kisses for you on your journey as a published author! Go kick some ass!
| BellaTesoro chapter 35 . 2/20/2016
I'm so happy you shared your news and gave us a little piece of your new story. If not for that, I would not have realized I never started Over the Top. It's been on my to be read list and your update presented itself to me as a golden opportunity to finally read this lovely story. Thank you so much for keeping this gem of a story here where readers such as myself can enjoy it.
Best wishes on your future success!
| BellaTesoro chapter 30 . 2/20/2016
The wedding was simply perfect. The vows, the songs, the whole thing. But what really brought me to tears was Edward's speech to his parents about unconditional love and how they forgave him for his teen behavior...Halo, was a perfect choice as well as all the other songs and verses. Lovely!
| BellaTesoro chapter 29 . 2/20/2016
This chapter was warm hearted, with the days filled with family, and the proposal...ring, backyard sex...a very hot ending too! This chapter could have been a great o/s on to itself.
| BellaTesoro chapter 26 . 2/19/2016
That was a great make up conversation. Jasper got to see the pieces that Edward is trying to work to make better and to heal his wounds. Jasper got to talk it out with people he respects and all support
his final decision it seems, that their love deserves to be able to grow and see what happens. Very
| BellaTesoro chapter 25 . 2/19/2016
Jack is such an interesting character. He's like a mix of both introverted Edward and Jasper.
I'm glad there isn't anything between them and Jasper having casual sex just to get even or
something. Better that he's out with a friend, getting an objective view of his situation while
having a good time. We need more Jack, maybe Edward and Jasper can someday help introduce
him to someone who will make him forget his love for a man that will never be his...
| BellaTesoro chapter 24 . 2/19/2016
I'm proud of Edward, he took a lot to express it all, finally put it all out there, especially how he picked up men after the break up. As you said, now it's in Jasper's court. It wouldn't be Jasper if he didn't think about himself and his pride and integrity. Let's see what Jasper does...
| BellaTesoro chapter 23 . 2/19/2016
So Jasper has a tendency toward panic attacks too. I like the realistic way Carlisle went into part doctor mode checking him out and then father mode but kept his distance and not giving too much away about what he and Edward said in regard to Jasper etc. And also like the Alice reunion, it seemed
realistic too, distance starting to move forward and it felt right that she'd refuse counseling on the grounds she mentioned. I like their nicknames for each other, showed they did have some good family history...