|Reviews for Over The Top|
| Sbieleski chapter 3 . 2/24/2009
Great story! I Love Jasper/Edward stories and yours is just fantastic! Can't wait to read more : )
| naelany chapter 3 . 2/24/2009
now there's a twist lol. Can't wait to see what happens next
| naelany chapter 2 . 2/24/2009
cryptic remarks by Jasper makes me want to read more _. So I guess that makes it win/win? _. So far, very much enjoying the story _
| ppinecone chapter 2 . 2/24/2009
What an intense, hot chapter! Jazz is really shaking up Edward's world in the best way possible.
| ppinecone chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Oh dear, you had me at “I want to make you sit on my nine-inch cock.”
What a fantastic, lemony start to this story! J/E slash is completely my thing, and this is amazing!
| iamawickedchild chapter 3 . 2/24/2009
Finally i can comment! jeez! this FF! :(
Anyway, i LOVE this story! its at first very very hot, Jasper and Edward are always HOT specially together, but once you get to know their history it becomes extremly sweet!
i cant wait to read more! :D
| Melissa228 chapter 3 . 2/24/2009
Hi there! You were the 1st on my list to leave a review for when the site started working again..so...here I am.
Manyafandom sent me the link to this story and it was a wonderfully delicious way to start my morning. Not only was it uber HOT, but I definately see the real potential for a killer story.
Awesome job so far and keep it coming :)
| EdsperDrarrySnarrySlashFan chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Loved loved loved it.
Really looking forward to the next chaptes and where you take it.
AKA TwilightedTyler (As you can see I am now able to log in :) )
| The Naughty Librarian chapter 3 . 2/21/2009
Wow. I don't know when I've enjoyed a lemon-free chapter this much. The way you brought out the details of J/E's past together, as well as the donation information, seemed so effortless, not at all like just 'filling in the gaps.' This is just wonderfully done, starfish, and I can't wait for the next installment.
| The Naughty Librarian chapter 2 . 2/21/2009
Oh GOD! I almost didn't take the time to review because I'm DYING to know how he knows him! ACK.
This was one pure mindfuck Jazz really turned the tables on Edward and it was nice to see him come unhinged & let go. I am LOVING this...
| geekgirlhope chapter 3 . 2/21/2009
Okay you know what. I actually liked this chapter better than the previous two. Not that the previous two didn't rock, cause they did. But because they connected and you portrayed it beautifully.
I loved getting the back stories and shared history of the two of them. And you are right maybe Edward isn't as tough of a nut as he appears to be.
This is extremely well written. Again thank you for sharing it. We need more J/E with actual story and not just smut.
Really loved it...now I want more.
| The Naughty Librarian chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
DAYUM, bb! That was HOT! I can't wait to read more...this was simply LUSCIOUS. You've made a fan tonight... ;)
| geekgirlhope chapter 2 . 2/21/2009
I really loved this chapter. You wrote that smut scene incredibly well. And that is a hard thing to do. It was graphic but not overly so. You combined the physical actions with the feelings and emotions perfectly. It was very well balanced out.
It was sweet and sensual. The sex and the after. Loved how Edward gave into Jazz. Or how he came to his decision. And the twist at the end...I cannot wait to see what that is about.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
| geekgirlhope chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
I am a fan of slash and Jazz/Edward slash. And there is not much really good Twi slash out there. And this is one of them. Only the first chapter and there is an actual story and not just smut. Which was delicious btw.
Really I am over the top pleased with this.
Loved it so far and can't wait to read the rest.
| Allieg8tor chapter 3 . 2/20/2009
That was amazing! So sweet!
I love that Edward donated to the Neonatal Intensive Care Unit! He's secretly such a sweetie!