Reviews for Over The Top
SUPER AMAZING chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
This is honestly my perfect story. I am a huge QAF fan! And for it to feature Jazz and Edward? How could I not love it?
LauraACullen chapter 4 . 2/26/2009
I love, love, LOVE your story and hope you plan to continue it for a long time. Not only is it smokin' hot, but I love Edward's emotional evolution. The backstory is genius and Jasper's self-confidence just jumps off the page. Awesome all the way around! I'm favoriting right now!
snoodles chapter 4 . 2/26/2009
I have to say that this really a wonderful love story. I'm all about Jasper usually wih Bella. But WOW th way you these two together is just beautiful. All the little butterflies are there just waiting for all the E/J goodness to start, Not that it hasn't already!

Having Manyafandom review your story is something I would be proud of. Her stories are the reason I started to look for more E/J. I'm jealous. Well I guess I should write a story first LOL
AngstGoddess003 chapter 4 . 2/26/2009
I am such a sucker for E/Jas fics. I sigh. It's beautiful bb. I love the work you put into their emotions and the background story.

I wish I could wax more poetic, but I think you've managed to mindf*ck me rather thoroughly.

Thanks so much for writing it.

GotMilkChunks chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
Oh I absolutely adore this story!

I love Jaspard... there just so adorable!

I'm looking forward to the next update!
Kagzii chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
i love this

its was really gewd

is this the last chapter or is there more?
EdsperDrarrySnarrySlashFan chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
Another great chapter. Thank you. As DS said, its wonderful that FF now stands for Fullyfunctional, we can all enjoy Jaspward yumminess.

Keep it coming (no pun intended).

AKA TwilightedTyler
Tempting Tangle chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
Jesus I have been trying To review this wonderful piece of writing for 3 days now lol stupid site XD

I have to say I am loving this ah gotta love some good guy-guy Lovin lol

abra.cadabara chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
Loved it!
leylastar chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
Have I told you I love you? Cause this chapter was amazing!
L chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
I loved the chapter! There's only one thing I would add: a warning at the top that reads: DO NOT READ AT WORK OR IN PUBLIC - TRUST ME! LOL. Can't wait for more!
Cheesecake Sweetheart chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
God, talk about epic FF login fail. I was getting pissed off that I couldn't login the past couple days because of the stupid glitch. But it's back and I couldn't be happier. XD

Anyway ... moving on.

This was my favorite chapter so far. The sweetness and smutness was balanced well ... and Edward had another epiphany, which is ... ama-za-zing. And, well, it shows that he's beginning to let down the walls he had so carefully built because of his past. Loved it even more when he asked Jasper to turn around so he could see him. Totally Hershey Kisses sweet. :D

Oh, and I loved the sex ledge in the shower, too ... and Jasper saying, "Suck me, beautiful." Gah. I love those two men. I ... there are no words.

Just ... I'm waiting anxiously for the next update.

And I'm shutting up now. XD
the-glory-days chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
I just discovered this story and I was so upset when I couldn't keep clicking to keep reading. lol I love how you're slowly taking it. It's not rushed, whatsoever. I can't wait to read more of this.
MyriadProBold chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
This chapter is so great. I love the way Edward figured all of this out with Jasper. "Our Bed" is great! I can't wait to read more.
naelany chapter 4 . 2/25/2009
*chuckles* this was a very sweet chapter... especially the end of it _~
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