Reviews for Over The Top
bluebaby3296 chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
OMG NO WAY! E PLEASE UPDATE LIKE NOW! pretty please wit a cookie on top...oh no wait edward likes to b onntop...well not n e more lolololololol
ellbtvsvm chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
Yay bottomEdward...update?
Guest chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
Thats realy hot. lol i dont think this is something im allowed to read at work. lol Good work - cant wait to see what happends :)
And I'm None the Wiser chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
love this story

great job!
MyriadProBold chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
How soon until the next chapter?

There were so many good things in here. Edward Cullen giddy? Cute. 'I want him in my future.'

Your descriptions of their activities was very good.
shelbyforeverlovely93 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
omg as i read this i was wiating for jasper to be 17 and Bella to go into labor lol

but yeah as i read i pictured the same thing nice work.

you should add to this maybe
troismommy chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
H.O.T! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Jazz is so mysterious and sexy! Rawr!
eeelleira chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
I LOVE IT! please write more!
MyriadProBold chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
The story is very interesting so far. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here.
sunnyday88 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Great start, very intense writing. Love it like you're getting in E's head and thoughts. Thank you for sharing. I'm already waiting for the next chapter...
cacy15 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
That was Hot!

Hope you post a new chapter soon!
Black-Luna chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
that was hot! great start. update soon.
SavannahLOVESTwilight chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
uh WOW.

that. was. freaking. AWESOME!

are u adding more chapters to this? i hope so...
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