Reviews for Cracked Mask
Guest chapter 2 . 9/14
Heh, somebody about to get their ass kicked
MegaMindAuthor chapter 2 . 8/16
Err, Naruto is so OOC, and plot is just uninteresting tbh.
yourfoxydope chapter 2 . 6/21
what a shit
BlueMapple chapter 3 . 4/3
I don't understand why Naruto is so weak (or at least seems weak). Harribel came after Naruto (and therefore became an arrancar after him) and despite everything, Naruto serves under her (and the story makes it clear that Harribel is more powerful and experienced than Naruto when it shouldn't be) . It's as if everyone evolves faster than him and Naruto remains the eternal noob of the group.
BlueMapple chapter 1 . 4/3
I'm surprised. I thought he and Grimmjow where more or less at the same power level. Why can Grim become a main espada and not Naruto ?
zuyiko wolf chapter 19 . 1/21
Thank The Lord Jesus Christ we can be forgiven
Have a good day
Arashi Uzukaze chapter 1 . 11/26/2022
I really hope Naruto starts to regain his original personality. The fact he is not being blunt and is showing respect and has not yet once been suspicious of Aizen shows that he is not yet fully reclaimed his identity.
Guest chapter 19 . 10/5/2022
Its a shame that epilogue never got finished
Xetherion chapter 19 . 9/6/2022
Worst garabage I've ever read. Story doesn't even have any attractive element that makes you want to continue reading. I stopped reading at chapter 10 because of how excruciatingly slow paced and shit the story became, then I came back and stopped again at 15, but decided to come back and finish it to at least do it some justice. Then you go an kill off your main character? Give me back the past fucking 14 hours I wasted from my damn lifetime reading this crap.
Xetherion chapter 18 . 9/6/2022
Naruto: Pulls out 9 tails against Obito in Naruto canon
Fanfic Naruto: Pulls out 7 tails against Hogyoku Aizen.

Yep, canon Naruto is way better than this fuckery of a character you made. At least the power scaling in Naruto makes sense unlike this mess.
Xetherion chapter 17 . 9/6/2022
What a disappointment...Retarduto risks pulling out 8 tails against Ichigo but is using 7 against a Hogyoku empowered Aizen? What kind of bullshit writing is this? Is Hogyoku Aizen somehow weaker than Vasto Lorde Ichigo now and poses less of a danger? It makes no sense, I can't believe how stupid this version of Naruto is, absolute shitty writing.
Maalik Ibn Anas chapter 19 . 8/31/2022
You’re a good writer but there’s something missing from this story that prevented me from getting truly attached to it and I cant put my finger on it.

Maybe its character depth and worldbuilding. Needed more of that. Naruto’s life just seems too boring and dry..
Maalik Ibn Anas chapter 14 . 8/27/2022
Vasto Lorde Ichigo shouldn’t be stronger than the Kyubi. Then again neither should Ulquiorra. Your power scaling is a pile of azz.
Maalik Ibn Anas chapter 12 . 8/27/2022
Kyubi: Fool! Don't interfere with this! I have this under control!…Fine, don't screw it up, Uzumaki.

Naruto: hold my beer
Maalik Ibn Anas chapter 12 . 8/27/2022
So the moment naruto takes control he starts getting each of his tails handed back to him? Damn.
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