|Reviews for Heaven's Mandate|
| Elixire J. Crow chapter 10 . 7/25/2010
hwow...what an ending,,
i just didnt guess that they will be parted just like that. cause of wukong.
now, i see that u are still an active author. would u like to grant me a wish to make another cao cao x nu wa? :)
i recently had play Warriors Orochi 2. and kinda love with the Wei scenario, nu wa as Wei strategist. and i love a little canon relationship between the hero of chaos and the goddess of creation.
so, i luv ur story so much. pliis make more, please...
or...should i make it myself? heheh
| MisterJB chapter 8 . 4/23/2009
This one gotta be one of the best stuff you ever wrote
| XDead ShogunX chapter 2 . 3/28/2009
I would just like to say that I love your writing style, and I truly wish my style was as fantastic as yours. Sadly, It's not even close.
| runickenaz chapter 10 . 3/19/2009
I absolutely find your style of writing an inspiration. I do like your characterization and emotions displayed throughout the one-shots left me wanting for more. You stayed simple with description yet concise as each chapter flows without confusion while hinting Nu Wa's hidden close intimacy with the Hero of Chaos.
From what I seen, your vocabulary is something I have not witness in fanfiction, and by further reading, I admit: I had to check definitions for some words I never heard of.
I also think that the goddess and Cao Cao are the perfect challenge to write about and you, fellow author, must be proud of your work.
And yes, the complexity of man is indeed vast and your words convey that badass idealism in a way I cannot myself. Excellent work!
| HarborRat chapter 8 . 3/11/2009
Thank you for restoring my faith in fanfiction and fiction as a whole. It's been too long since I've been able to smile while reading a piece not only because of the work itself, but for brilliant use of language. Each chapter is truly a work of art, the character's progression, the dynamics of their relationship and the ability to have Mengde's ambition hang over them like a thunderstorm, growing with intesity in each segment. Just brilliant.
| MisterJB chapter 7 . 3/10/2009
angelhood. I liked that one
| HarborRat chapter 7 . 3/10/2009
Wow. Just an awesome read. Beautiful writing, perfect dialogue and very sensual. Very well done.
| MisterJB chapter 6 . 3/6/2009
if this was nowadays, Cao Cao would have an cellphone under the table and would be listening to a ipod XD
| coconut13 chapter 3 . 3/3/2009
Another good one! :D I'm running out of praise. You're a great writer!
| coconut13 chapter 2 . 3/3/2009
Yeow! That's a hot chapter XD
Once again great chapter. You provided us with the facts- Cao Cao's a horny bugger, without giving explicitly overdone details and making one squirm uncomfortably. (Then again, I usually shy away from graphic lemons, so that's just what me talking.)
Anyway, another great chapter! :)
| coconut13 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
I liked the idea of Cao Cao/Nu Wa in Orochi 2, and first let me say, great title; that's what lured me in. Heaven's Mandate is one of those cool, official, DW-age phrases that I always pick up on. D
Heck, great story too! I love your Cao Cao; he's Cao Cao, but he's also more... I dunno, relatable. XD
And Nu Wa is GREAT; she's not the Ice Queen she is in Orochi (even though, she's Nu Wa, so she's badass either way) but she's still godly. She's more of a kindly goddess.
Anyway, great job! :)
| Mist Rogue chapter 5 . 3/2/2009
What can I say...
This is absolutely beautiful. A very nice piece of work and it deserves a lot.
You got me captivated there the whole time.
| MisterJB chapter 3 . 2/24/2009
this is very well written. Nu Wa can be quite fun sometimes.
I'm sure that Cao Cao just went to the frontlines because he knew that Nu Wa was going to be his nurse XD
| Meow chapter 3 . 2/21/2009
I don't usually comment on stuff but what u wrote was some of the best that i have read on this site. And i hope u write more especially about this pairing.
| SilentNinja chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
This has me wandering the symmetrics of Cao Cao's glorfication. Glad you're the one who doing a pairing I really wanted to read about. Cao Cao x Nu Wa. Nicely wrote and hard to read.