|Reviews for Troubled Times|
| Come-Along-Williams chapter 2 . 3/7/2009
Ohmygosh I am such a complete idiot! I didn't read your author comment properly in your first fic about it not being by surrogacy. Sorry. So forget what I said about the reactions being different from the shows. And about the sequel, I didn't see your second chapter. Gosh I feel like an idiot.
But I really like this chapter, good work :)
| Come-Along-Williams chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
YAY! More Shortland Street fiction! runs around in happy circles I'm a HUGE fan of Shortland Street so I am very happy that there are Shortland St fanfics here!
Your story was great. You should do a sequel, maybe into Hunter's reactions (like maybe make it different from how he reacted on the show?)...
You captured the characters really well, like I can actually imagine them saying it in real life (if that makes sense)
Anyway, would love to read some more Shortland Street fanfics from you.
| NZGirl25 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Really nice chapter.
But you need to inprove on your grammar a bit. No offense.