Reviews for Thunder
Unidentified Gem chapter 1 . 6/12
GendryMightBeComingBackSoon chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
A great story. Very good.
Charlotte chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
This story was very well written and everything was bery accurate. I loved your description of the storm, it was very visually dynamic. Good work!
viennacantabile chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
wow. this is really great. this idea is very original, and is a good reminder of who the pevensies still are at that point. i love how it connects narnia with 1940s england. wonderful job!
K.J. Almazan chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
kutlessgurl90 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
that was really sweet! peter is always the sibling the others can turn to for comfort and reassurance. i wish i had an older brother like him. really good fanfic! )
Don-Jam chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
I can see thunder being like an air raid, Cool sibling bonding.
Corilyne chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
I am reviewing! I like it, because I can see them thinking thunder was an air raid. I never thought of that before! Good idea, good job!
Aslan is love chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
wow very realistic and it kinda had an air of foreshadowing for both Peter and Susan when they return after prince caspian. and loved that they still have thoughts of their parnets and worry about their safty
LucyCrewe11 chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
What a lovely one-shot! I loved it. Very sweet sibling bonding. It was a very nice fic.
lecabe chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
nice-very simple but sweet. i like it.