|Reviews for Dawn's early death|
| Retta chapter 10 . 1/2/2010
W-what? AN UPDATE?
This story is still fabulous, although I'm a little confused with the beginning stuff.
| Retta chapter 9 . 10/21/2009
Why hasn't this story been updated in over three months?
Update, I'm curious as to what happens 3
| Aleika chapter 9 . 10/13/2009
This is a wonderful story, and it absolutely MUST be updated. MUST.
Please update this as soon as possible. :)
| Blackrose2005 chapter 9 . 7/16/2009
OH. MEH. GOD... HOT. AND SPICY.. AND... YEAH. U KNOW...
But, I wanna paste this, Cuz I stopped reading and laughed for like.. 3mins: Whether they realized it or not Richter and his amazing butt pouch had jumped down from the roof above with his weapons drawn.
ROFL. AND HIS AMAZING BUTT POUCH.. WOOT! Yup. The first thing she notices... IS HIS AWESHUMLY HOT ASS! Rofl. Now..
HAVE SHAME RICHTER. YOU'RE... USING HER! But... In a very very good way... :D You had me re-reading that scence.. When he kisses her... Like.. 5 times.. O_O AND I'M NOT JOKING... Each time I read it.. I was like... DAYUM... SO HOT... -sighs-
Rofl. Well, to answer ur questions...
Rofl. I can tell that it was an 'out of the blue' idea. XD But it was a very good way to end this chapter. And.. AW! But, that's kinda good. She still doesn't know too much about him. So she'll just have to learn more about him later. XD And Hmm... The baby being born in the next chapter... O-o Alright i guess. o-o
Updatez BUT... IF YOU HAVE ILEX.. LIKE.. DAY DREAMING ABOUT THE KISS IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.. I'MMA CRACK UP... Cuz, she knowz that it was really just lust.. But HEY! HE LIP-LOCKED YOU! You should want to remember that day. XD
| ShelbyO chapter 9 . 7/10/2009
This story is just a big bottle of awesomesauce. :D
I love how Richter acts around Ilex. Very hot. 3
I've actually been following it for a while, just am way too lazy to log in. Please update ASAP
| CrimsonMagi94 chapter 8 . 6/26/2009
This is awsome. Make more, and you will definantly see more reviews from me.
| Blackrose2005 chapter 1 . 6/23/2009
LOL! LOL LOL LOL LOL!
Ilex started to ramble about random crap... And then proceeded to annoy the fuck outta Richter... Saying that he was a stalker... ROFL! I wuved that...
-GASPS DRAMATICALLY- IT'S ZELLY... ISN'T IT! 0_0
lol. I read the reviews... XE
ANYWAYS... Rofl, Richter waa going to bring up the whole entire butt pouch thing...
WHAT I COULDN'T BELIEVE... IS THAT HE STARED BACK... AND ILEX'S REACTION WAS SO AWESOME! XD
Best fanfic EVER tm!
| QwertySparrow chapter 8 . 6/22/2009
LOL! I wonder how she will act like when she sees Zelos helping them with Richter.
| Valor chapter 8 . 6/21/2009
ah i love this story it's so funny1 ilex it an awesome OC! I think Ganesha's fiance is Zelos right? anyhoo grest chappie! Keep it up!
| Blackrose2005 chapter 7 . 6/9/2009
AHH! U UPDATED! -jumps up and down-
And me srry that I haven't reviewed.. I've been on vacation in Hawai'i... So i was only able to review to ur chap today... or night...
Anyways.. WHAT? UR WRITING IS NOT CRAP! MINE IS. O-O
Anyways, YUSH. Ilex's going to see Richter... WOOT NESS!
-waves- I gotta go, my dad is getting mad.. O_O
| Werewolf559 chapter 7 . 6/4/2009
I'll make this quick. Your story is not crap. I like it, even made me laugh a little. Always remember: "Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality."
| Valor chapter 7 . 6/2/2009
Awesome story ] I was so happy when i found this story cause Richter is so sexy with butt pouch and Ilex is just supa cool! Loevly job! Please update soon ]
| Blackrose2005 chapter 6 . 5/24/2009
OH, MEH, GOSH, YOU UPDATED! -glomps-
T's fine, I don't think that there were any typos... Or if there were... I didn't even notice.. O-O
ANYWAYS... WO.. YUSHNESS... THE SARCASTICNESS OF THIS FIC IS FUCKING AWESHUM!
And, the name of this chapter.. ROX! " My eyes appreciated your butt pouch. " ROFL! ROFL ROFL ROFL!
Richter and Ilex's talk wasn't bad, but you could tell that she was kinda interested in him.. -wink wink- You're doing a pretty good job with the romatic part of this fic, so don't worry about it! Ilex is the type of girl who wont accept that she's starting to like someone untill near the end. O-o Or for other reasons...
-waves- UPDATE PERSON! OR I WILL... MOB U WITH COOKIES! O_O (And trust me, I have my ways... )
| Blackrose2005 chapter 5 . 4/12/2009
WO! IT'S BEEN SO LONG! -sobs- I thought for a while that you weren't going to update anymore...
BUT... ZOMG! Awesomeness chapter! I totally loved it!
And, i don't think it got confusing in the mid! I understood it perfectly. :P
And, the part with Ilex pretty much not breathing, and nobody noticing... Was pretty funny. D
Anyways, i hope you have time to update! -waves-
| Rikaruru chapter 4 . 2/19/2009
Still very nice and well written. One thing you might want to change is your summary, though. Most of your pairings are normal and canon. Not only that, having RichterxOC is usually something that most readers will avoid. And don't say the story is better then the summary, it just shows you can't make a good summary, which some people add up to not being able to write a good story. Just take some time to think about a good summary that presents your story well.
Nice random fact, btw. _