Reviews for A Mother's Love: Fire and Blood
don't worry about my name chapter 44 . 1/15/2013
Do NOT make this a harem. Harems are disgusting and overrated. I hate harems with a passion, and if this becomes a harem I am going to be highly upset. You already messed up A Father's Love with the minato and temari thing, please don't ruin this. Temari liking naruto is pretty stupid too. Really? Please make her move on. 4 year age difference, maybe if naruto was the older one. 16 and 12? *sigh* just don't ruin it
Just a reviewer chapter 38 . 1/14/2013
I can't believe the twist you added... I don't like temari liking naruto though. And you better not make a fool out of kushina or else. Lol Jk but seriously though don't make her a dumbass
Amer Leon chapter 45 . 1/10/2013
i guess that over all i was excited to read this story...but to me it was a letdown as a naruhina fan... because hinata was left out of the action. i think as a naruto story this is ok...but as a naruhina story i have read much better. she is just filler in your story...and sooo weak that even kushina says it right to her face and leaves her out of an important mission. i have never seen that in any other naruhina story. so i wouldn't call this really a naruhina story...just a naruto story that includes moment with hinata.
Amer Leon chapter 42 . 1/10/2013
you sure have made hinata a weak character in your story. i actually think that what kushina said to her here was kind of cold. but, really, you have made her a super weak character...much weaker than in the manga. i think that detracts from your story. why make her soooo weak?
Amer Leon chapter 39 . 1/10/2013
i'm wondering why hinata isn't in the exams also. in the entire story they haven't spent time together in action...isn't she a ninja too? so she sits at home?
Amer Leon chapter 38 . 1/10/2013
another great chap...tamari should keep her hands off naruto:)
Amer Leon chapter 36 . 1/10/2013
great job with the first bit of romance for naruto and hinata outside of the letters. a little mystery at the end there...
Amer Leon chapter 35 . 1/10/2013
great action...one question, what happened to hinata in all of this...she is gone it seems?
Amer Leon chapter 33 . 1/10/2013
oh, man! this is another super twist here! I love it and the way you have made naruto sooo loyal to hinata. this action at the end is amazing.
Amer Leon chapter 32 . 1/9/2013
well, good chpt...itachil was lucky to survive...and hinata finally got a hug from naruto. exciting chapter!
Amer Leon chapter 31 . 1/9/2013
wow! very cool job with the reunion on hinata and naruto...i am wondering what happens now...since they really haven't spent any time together in many years in this story.
Amer Leon chapter 30 . 1/9/2013
good...off hinata and itachi go! i was hoping that she would do something besides be afraid...and blush in the story. kishi has finally put her into the center of the action in the manga...so it will be fun to see what she does in your story here.
Amer Leon chapter 29 . 1/9/2013
hinata is finally involved in some action...and it only took 29 chapters to get her in... wow!
Amer Leon chapter 26 . 1/9/2013
this chapter is partial comedy...is it not? it was a lot of action but funny at the same time. good job!
Amer Leon chapter 22 . 1/9/2013
this is such a great chapter...a lot happened in the last few lines here as asuma made the motion to reestablish the namikaze clan..etc. also, fagaku will seek to get rid of the betrothal of naruto and hinata...that just hit a bump in the road.
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