Reviews for A Mother's Love: Fire and Blood
Ibskib chapter 38 . 11/18/2014
beg her too - beg her to
You temporarily - You will temporarily
Ibskib chapter 36 . 11/18/2014
Het - Hey
Ibskib chapter 34 . 11/18/2014
corrections:
At the instant eh door - At that instant the door
Shinzou said admirably - Shinzou said admiringly
Sake four - Sound Four
heart gave - heart gave oout
Ibskib chapter 32 . 11/18/2014
correction:
glowed - glowered
Ibskib chapter 31 . 11/18/2014
Hyuuga - the Hyuuga
Ibskib chapter 30 . 11/18/2014
Correction:
started top - started to
Ibskib chapter 25 . 11/18/2014
correction:
apprentice ship - apprenticeship
sis - his
be weapon - be a weapon
Ibskib chapter 24 . 11/18/2014
Correction:
The maybe - Then maybe
Ibskib chapter 20 . 11/18/2014
Correction:
sow - now
Ibskib chapter 18 . 11/18/2014
Correction:
toe - tone
Ibskib chapter 17 . 11/18/2014
Corrections:
Any way - Anyway
an me - and me
tot eh - to the
Ibskib chapter 14 . 11/18/2014
corrections:
Kage Bushin - Kage Bunshin
they instruction - the instruction
to bushins - two bunshin
Calliecature chapter 15 . 10/28/2014
Though I just stumbled in this fanfic, the scene where Gaara finally... I have to stop myself from crying. Sorry if I just reviewed in the 15th chapter but if you have any questions you want to ask about your fic in a reader's point of view, I'll be happy to answer them.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
hmm, even Kakashi is going...
brandon chapter 45 . 9/12/2014
is this story gonna make any progress someday soon?
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