Reviews for Stolen Moments |
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![]() ![]() OSEA TODO ERA UN SUEÑO? PERO E STUVO SUPER GENIAL |
![]() ![]() ![]() These stolen moments are just so dang cute! Especially love this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does a review seven years after the fact still count? I read this for three work nights straight and I have no regrets. I'm so glad they chose the stolen moments version - the anime left too much to be desired in their love story and the manga didn't have enough romance. I guess that's why I'm still here filtering through stories after all this time. I'm kinda glad there wasn't a big senshi/general lovefest sidebar. I'm glad there was angst, but it was distressing for the whole chapter it lasted LOL. Please forgive me for saying this, but I laughed when I saw your note about "than" and noticed it used improperly the whole rest of the story. Your writing is otherwise faultless. Much love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just one question.. did she build the hospital for mamoru? with him being the king.. he's going to play doctor too? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww.. is this the end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww .. that is so sweet. you rearrange the scenes in the manga and anime. i love your concept. |
![]() ![]() ![]() waaa haruka! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think.. this is the sweetest of all. minako playing her part.. the part where she knelt in front of mamoru made my heart flutter |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww.. how did they know? thank you for updating |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry that i didn't review since chapter 1.. i just came across your story. Although there are some grammatical errors, your story is one of the best i have read. You have a great talent. it just flow and easy to fall in love it. i could imagine the story based on your storytelling.. it's really fun.i'll. make to. review for the next chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh I just want to thank you for writing such a wonderful, wonderful alternate reality where Usagi and Mamoru fell in love on their OWN terms without interference of the past or destiny trying to shove them together. I never doubted mamoru's love for usagi in canon but it would've been really wonderful to see it play out this way. I also really enjoy them getting together later in life since the age difference in college makes mamoru seem less like a cradle robber and more like a scandalous mature love. I wish we had seen more of the shittennou x senshi resolution at the end since I actually genuinely felt bad for them but other than that I'm really happy with how it ended. I love love love the development and build up to usagi and mamoru's relationship. You're really good and constructing witty banter that flows seamlessly. The cheesy scenes did get a little cringe but I totally understand it from the newlyweds POV. Usagi has a lot of love to give |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how Usagi has always casually stated that she was going to rule the world, and Mamoru just went along with it as if she was commenting on the weather. I love it. shows how in deep the boy has it for her LOL. and the reveal. the argument and banter, HILARIOUS LOL. I was trying to think about how you could do it without it sounding overly cliche or forced, but this wasn't what I had in mind. hahahahha it's great |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely LOVE the relationship you are portraying between Usagi and Mamoru. it's so fun, teasing and full of witty banter. the cat & mouse chase between the two is so fluffy and delicious... and oh god the flirting. GET A ROOM ALREADY. this chapter was so insanely sweet and so wholly Usagi. I absolutely love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() and now... KISS. oh wait. they already did... but not where it counts! I can already tell the party is going to be a doozy. |