|Reviews for I Want To Be a Father|
| emowoods205 chapter 1 . 6/9/2018
Well I just read this again for the millionth time and I still love it!
| Fraxus chapter 4 . 8/9/2017
I'm dead, this is adorable. And i love the kidnapping at the end, it was good.
| emowoods205 chapter 4 . 5/8/2017
3~ love this so much
| emowoods205 chapter 3 . 5/8/2017
| emowoods205 chapter 2 . 5/8/2017
awee i loved all there reactions so cute
| emowoods205 chapter 1 . 5/8/2017
i love this so much its so well writen and i love the way they act 3
| Twot chapter 4 . 1/21/2017
| Anime lover chapter 2 . 11/28/2016
Hahahahaha the ending was perfect
| OrangeJellyfish chapter 4 . 12/17/2015
I love happy endings...;-;
| OrangeJellyfish chapter 2 . 12/17/2015
Lol he got you teme! XD
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/4/2015
i love it.
| berry5tz chapter 4 . 4/16/2015
This was very good!
I realize that it was a shock for Sasuke to learn that he was getting a child of his Own through Naruto. So I can understand why he needed time. But it still upset me that he walked away from Naruto. Eh...But then again, Naruto, had me upset with how foolish he was being about being pregnant. I realize he didn't know any better. But just as Sasuke, failed to take in account Naruto feelings when he walked away. Naruto, failed to think of his baby and his husband. Well... I guess it all balanced out then in the
| mirian chapter 4 . 9/29/2014
puedes hacer una secuela
| 777angeloflove chapter 4 . 9/1/2014
| IntensityWire chapter 4 . 7/25/2014
Love the story so far however I was disappointed that you made them have a boy because EVERY mpreg for these two I've read it's a GODDAMN boy I was really hoping to find something different in this. The plot was good but turn out was disappointing if you give them another kid or write another mpreg for them you should make the baby a girl finding them with a DAUGHTER is really hard and I think it would be fun to play around with sasukes protectiveness if he had a daughter that e had to scare the boys from but even if it's a demon fanfic and they have a litter there is always either more boys then girls or all boys and I was hoping to find what I was looking for in this Fic a well written well thought out story with a female child for once an I almost got it ad on a constructie note you might want to slow down you rushed through the pregnancy when you could have added more drama like what if after he almost drown not only was he taken off missions but for the safety of the child he was on bed rest however I really hope you don't do what EVERYONE DOES and be like oh now the baby will be kidnapped cause that's a little ore done too