|Reviews for Time Apart Changes Things|
| Na-cat chapter 5 . 5/30/2009
Awesome fic! A light but good plot with a nice dose of humour, I think you did great. :)
I especially love the character interactions (and Tai's fate!)
| Potgenie chapter 5 . 3/3/2009
Your chapters are always ever so random! :D This seems a little rushed (maybe 'cos of quite a few punctuation errors) but the ending randomness is befitting of this entirely random story. (Guess which word I've been using too often so far!) Anyway, I think having a date on a tree sounds pretty fun! :D Great job!
| emotionless-robot chapter 5 . 3/2/2009
Ahh... that's better.
I lurrve the ending, by the way. I think it wraps up the story nicely XD
| SugarSpiral chapter 5 . 3/2/2009
"and SugarSpiral, who threatened to gut me if I didn’t write the epilogue. I’m glad I live across the ocean."
| Lord Pata chapter 5 . 3/2/2009
lol nice epilogue, so Gatomon and Veemon went for a coffee? they should have invited the other digimon, I doubt they were the only ones tired with all that and wanted a distraction lol
And Veemon was spying on Davis and Kari? and here I thought he would be sleeping after all that tiring problem XD
| PrincessJaded chapter 5 . 3/2/2009
Okay...despite my "anti-prologue" this was good. And funny, which is a major plus!
| SugarSpiral chapter 4 . 2/27/2009
Or you loose you insides.
| emotionless-robot chapter 4 . 2/27/2009
Meh... I'm not sure if I want an epilogue...
On second thought, yes.
YES I DO.
| Potgenie chapter 4 . 2/27/2009
Yes for epilogue! :D
I'm still laughing. The funniest part was when Patamon tried to put out the fire in Tai's hair. I swear that part is GENIUS! XD Not to mention the other lovely bits of randomness: Captain Firefly, Tai somehow preferring the word "poo" over "crap" and the bet... I love how you gave took this challenge and gave it such a fantastic twist!
Oh and I've already mentioned the history of my nickname on the forum. Remember neopets? I don't know how many years ago that is but the name stuck. So now you know! Hopefully you'll grant us an epilogue! :D :D
| Lord Pata chapter 4 . 2/26/2009
mental note: never piss off Gatomon, that is bad for your health o.O
I never thought I could see a fic where Gatomon would attack her own partner and a another digidestined too o.O
Now that's a hell of a twist XD
| PrincessJaded chapter 4 . 2/26/2009
I like where it ended. I'm not a big Daikari fan. Takari, heck even Kenkari is good for me.
I like that Gato kicked her ass though! That was brillant! *shakes head* Will Tai ever learn that the pillow fort DOESN'T WORK! That was the best part though, them trying to hold of Gato!
Good job! D
| SugarSpiral chapter 3 . 2/25/2009
Well, I gave my proper review on the forum...
But it's even better reading second time around!
| Potgenie chapter 3 . 2/24/2009
Only one more chapter? I'm curious now about what kind of twist you're gonna come up with! This chapter was really funny. I think you've got a talent for writing humour! :D
| emotionless-robot chapter 3 . 2/24/2009
Damn being all obtus lately...
Anyways, love the chapter XD And the death of the teddy bear. If he's still got it after all those years, well... it IS about time he got rid of it!
| PrincessJaded chapter 3 . 2/24/2009
One more! That's it! You can't...you shouldn't...I'm sad now. (
I loved their arguments. Classic, and Ken and TK trying to be spies...great.
I'm just glad this darn thing works again!