|Reviews for Shaken|
| ryuk-sempai chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
this scene made me cry, and I've always firmly believed light DID care when his dad died. you have no idea how much I love this and your interpretation.
| Gasoline Diamond chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
;A; Okaaay ;;
| OrangeR0se chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
This was so in character and perfect...just great...
| Vashtijoy chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
O-oh. I really like this - in fact, I love it. The bible quotes, the detachment, the warped reasoning, it's superb. A.
| XbuttonsX chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
-takes breath- I really need to learn to breathe while reading your spellbinding works of art. I had meant to click on Jokers Wild but that obviously didn't happen. but, i would have stumbled onto this one eventually. And I am glad I did. Very moving. It almost had me feeling sorry for him again.
| Dlvvanzor chapter 1 . 7/23/2009
So Light's round the bend.
Ah, understatement 3
| Vera-Sama chapter 1 . 4/3/2009
Quite sad, but also very good. I love how well written this, and your other works I've read, are. It' s refreshing. Great story.
| IceQueenRex chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
And I am back and here to start reviewing! *evil laughter*
So, I liked this one a lot. The biblical references in this one made me go back to the scene where Light watched his father die and think, "Hm, it really does fit."
:) Good job with this one!
| SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I honestly am at a loss for words.
And since I usually can't shut up, that's just more proof that this story was mind-blowingly amazing.
Brilliant, spectacular work.
| Jenwryn chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Oh, my. I guess... I guess this had to be written, at some point.
"If his father has given his life for the new world’s white souls, what does Light have left to offer them? Nothing. Nothing left. Nothing more." ...is just so poignant.
| Twilight L Xari chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
...I don't even know what to say. Wow. Just...wow. This was awesome.
| 1714998 chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
you showed lighto's character very well. I would start ranting about how Lighto got what he deserved and all but we're not talking about Lighto anymore are we? these are Kira's words. and Kira isn't human. whatever he is, he has a point. that was one way to get rid of a hostage problem. keep writing such things, it's realy impressive.
| black laurel chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
That was..that was. Deep.
"The tears are cutting into his skin; why isn’t he bleeding?"
Just... I have no words.
The last line gave me shivers. Very powerful.
| Korikali chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
WOW. This is heartwrenching, and so poignant! I love how you show that Light is humbled by his father, it's an excellent interpretation of his feelings at the time. Ooh, and I've been rewatching Death Note with my sister (hopefully inching her towards the yaoi, inching her...) and now that I'm doing more than hanging on to the plotline for dear life, I've realized that Mr. Yagami is TEH SHIT. *adoration*
| SapphireMistress chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
amazing, amazing, amazing!
I can't even say a thing!
Yes, I did feel sorry for Light at that moment, because he lost his father to his own uhm...desire to have a new world...
And yes, Soichiro-san is a good man! _ we all love him!
really well-written for a single moment...O_O wow! Me give joo lots of review cookies!