|Reviews for Grand Tour|
| James Birdsong chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
Awesome perhaps. Yes perhaps awesome two chapters.
| PurpleMoon3 chapter 2 . 2/20/2009
I love you.
| Tyler chapter 2 . 2/19/2009
Loved it! Lighthearted and entertaining.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Cylon One chapter 2 . 2/19/2009
This is just great!
Continuing is a must.
That was cool and amazing how Ryoga's easily-get-lost-ness was used to escape the Borg.
Of Voyager escaping the Borg.
Sounds like they may have gone who knows where together.
Maybe even when.
| Vorsith chapter 2 . 2/19/2009
Ha! Too weird and wonderfully intriguing! I definitely want to read more of this! Definitely the first Ive seen of this nature. I kinda wanted to see a confrontation with Oddo but I will settle for Worf if its in the cards! I will be checking back hoping for an update!
| Cylon One chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Ryoga's get-lost-easily-condition has taken him to one of my favorite places in time and space.
The Star Trek universe.
From DS9 to Voyager.
This is awesome.
I look forward to more of this tour.
| KingKong chapter 2 . 2/19/2009
Alright! This is definitely worth continuing :)
Looking forward to your next update.
| TerraBull chapter 2 . 2/19/2009
I like this as well.
Ryouga is not one of the most intelligent of sources. Falling for the fast talk.
The Master Spy, at this time, does he have that implant within himself, to make him happy? (Not sure if that is a correct interpitation)
It seems to be missing a traditional cliche phrase, such as a angry bellow "WHERE THE HELL AM I NOW?" and a curse to Ranma after confirming he is lost, as well as a poorly drawn map.
No idea where they will end up, but I am curious if the Borg will be able to decipher exactly how they got there, logically or not, and if it will cause them to shut down explaining it.
How long will they be able to keep hold of Ryouga? He can get lost fairly easily..
Was Ryouga between Journeys? Bringing back a magical item to defeat Ranma or just typically lost.
Thanks for the story to read so far.
| TerraBull chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Just found this.
I like it, it is ammusing.
One comment perhaps? Ryouga's Umbrella might have been concidered a weapon perhaps, could Worf easily lift it?
| enderverse chapter 2 . 2/18/2009
this is so great! no Q yet? hes a little over used in Star Trek xovers but this is exactly the kind of situation that amuses him.
| Wisper chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
| Rowan Seven chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Heh, amusing. As a DS9 fan I got a kick out of this. Ryouga dragging other people along with his sense of misdirection surprised me a bit, but considering just how lost he is it seems reasonable. Anyway, the writing could be better at spots but overall the prose is good and descriptive, and this short chapter was pretty amusing. Good job so far.
| SOTG chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
My eyes scream potential! I want to read more!
If you need any help, I'm happy to offer it. Anything to be able to read more of this. I'm enthralled, and after only one chapter!
| Hat O' Doom chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Aww, what a pain...I was forced to log into review. Oh well.
This is an interesting idea you have here. The idea is silly enough that I assumed the writing would be somewhat lacking in depth but you surprised me. Its an interesting idea and you made it flow very well. I'd definately like to see where you go with this!