HILARIOUS

this really made me smile, it was so good to read something non-serious and funny and a little tiny bit sexy :D seriously enjoyed myself!

~Katie

It's late.

It's really, really late.

It's HORRENDOUSLY late.

And everyone's asleep.

But you've somehow managed to make me laugh and accidentally (but oh my god it was pretty satisfying) make me cause a huge ruckus. (Imagine my knee, and that slidy keyboard thingy...)

Anyways~ That was brilliant! I wish I could write as wittingly well as you do!

Keep up the awesome work and lawls, YOU'RE ALIVE!

bwahahaha. this made me chuckle. good job. an interesting take on the whole akuroku thing.

lol, poor roxas, thought he was the seme. ended up to be the uke anyways. that was a bad choice he made in the first place anyways. who chains them self to a bed if they're trying to turn someone /off?/ that's even harder if you're roxas. 10 out of 3! loved this, GO AKUROKU!

~amaya

First reaction upon finding an alert in my inbox: Oh god, oh my god. It's the Bluest and Funkiest of all Blue Funks. What's this, what's this?

Loving Roxas's reaction, and the bacon is a kind of a cherry on the cake. Nice detail. "I don't want any vicious women coming after you." That sounds like something my mother would tell me. Do I respect other people's relationships enough to not start hitting on the guy if I find him attractive? No, I don't.

Oh, Roxas, honey. Who said it was going to be a girl? Hmm, by the way, Finland allowes gay marriages as well. Ahhaahhaa, I nearly fell off my chair laughing! "Just imagine a plate of spaghetti." With or without sauce, Roxas? You know, I might've asked that.

Jingled on of the handcuffs in greeting. You're killing me.

"Yes, Axel was hot. Yes, Axel was looking at him like he was ready to eat him. Yes, Roxas liked it." If someone on this humble site of fanfiction is able to write delightfully naughty text, it's you. I just keep wondering who'll wear a dress and a garter. But I think they'd look very hot in suits as well. Axel could always wear a garter under his dress pants and surprise Roxas later. C'mon, Roxas would love that, the little perv.

Such a stubborn uke, Rox. Axel very much approves.

And Tifa, I think you're right. I also feel Roxas will give matromony a shot. And I think he's going to make an effort to be 'the husband' but in the end, he'll always fall for Axel's sneaky ways.

And ending finally did it for me. I AM DEAD. Wearing a paperbag and nothing else. OH. MY. GOD. If it was anyone except Axel, my darling angel, I'd be mortified, but since it actually is him, I'm loving it with every fibre of my being and I want to cuddle with YOU - yes, you - for writing this.

Oh my gawd. Totally awesome.

I am so glad that you're still writing... I was worried you stopped! So, either way, love it. Especially the whole scene with the handcuffs. That was hilarious.

I loved it :D Yay for Canada, and I love how you wrote Axel and Roxas _ Awesome job, I'll have to check out your dA page as well!

The Funk has gotten out of her funk! Huzzah!

*throws a party*

Also, hooray for Canada's Gay rights! Take that prejudice bastards! :D

Mrrmph. Lovely, as usual. Jeeze.

I'll have to explore dA for you, just to keep me satisfied while you deny me my Funkalicious Akuroku. :/

ahhaha oh man what a funny idea~ w hahah the bacon as silly~ shove* *tap* very motherly haahha ahaha poor Roxas~ wild case of bed-head while furiously chewing down bacon and trying to swallow while speaking at the same time hahahaha AHHAHAHAHA she's so...nice hahaha whores hahaahhaah aahah oh man thats the greatest mom haha ahahaahahahhahahaahahha oh man ahhah poor Cloud HAHAHAHAAHHAHAHA super sad paper bag hahahah and an unhealthy chain fetish haahahah AHAHAHAHAHHA oh not again kekekekek thats so great w ahahahah ahahah silly Roxas hahahahahahahaa ohh yeah Roxas is awfully smooth aahahah yeah uh that was...lame hahahah HAHAHAHHA poor Axel hahahahahHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA oh man yeah i love Tifa too haahahahahhahahah

oh goodness - giggle city over here.

that was an amazing combination of humor and plot. i loved it.

Oh, wifey D

I love you and this is hilarious.