|Reviews for Halflife: Hero Beggining|
| Fanwright chapter 1 . 3/14
I don't where to start with this. Since this story hasn't been updated since 2009, I'm not even sure if this review will matter. Well, worth a shot.
This story (or chapter?) desperately needs a re-haul. Grammar and structure are not coherent, punctuation is laughably abused, and transitions are… well there are none.
The writing was so atrocious is made me laugh. If it wasn't for a youtube video by the same name I would have wondered where the writers got their hilarious material from. I can't believe it came from this.
| wtf chapter 1 . 2/4
| StephenThePlaystationDude chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
You're one of the most well known fanfic authors ever. How do you do it?
| crankyman7 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Wow...it's so bad, it's a veritable work of art.
squirrelking, you sir are a genius.
Were this story and it's sequel to disappear from the web, I would be sad forever. My fellow humens, we must preserve these tales for future generations. Who's with me?
| Nigger POLICE chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
Real good seed almost grow up
| Big BOOGER chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
REAL GUDD READ ALMOST BLO UP
| Reader chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
You know what? I saw many people trying and failing miserably back in the day, but you, son... you're a natural.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
| A5h K3tchum chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Guys, calm down. I don't think squirrelking is trying to be serious. I think he's making terrible FanFics intentionally (kind of like My Immortal, only not as horrendous).
Go find the GMod (Garry's Mod) adaptation of his Half-Life stories on YouTube (by user "Djy1991"). They're some of the funniest things you'll ever see, I swear. They aren't my videos, by the way, so I'm not trying to spam you guys.
| GreenFedora chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
The story is awesomely funny because it made me laugh. Godd wrk
| Wj is an idiot chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Wj you really are an idiot. Do the world a favor and kill yourself.
| Manager Of The Abyss chapter 1 . 1/10/2011
Holy... crap... I think my head just imploded. You would actually have to TRY to make a story so poorly written as this one.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
My friend Tony suggested that I check this out. He was right; you're very funny, in the lulz sense. Carry on, dude. )
| squirellkiing chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
that was hilarious
| Genieoos chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
this es trylu teh best fanfictin rver ritten