Reviews for Luxuria
DevianYUE chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
ROFL very original xD
Ayumu smile chapter 2 . 5/26/2012
This story is awesome! Hey, do you mind if i use your ideas *about the 7 sins personification idea* for my story?
Murasaki Argenteria chapter 2 . 6/18/2011
xD LOL! *roflol*

That was adorable P
PockoChi chapter 2 . 12/10/2010
this was soooo entertaining to read at 2am in the morning! 33 maybe when you have time you could do an epilogue! :D
Arienna Natalitha chapter 2 . 10/12/2010
awwww what a sweet ending! I can't believe hiruma doesn't think of anything other than training... hahaha!
Tatsu-neko chapter 2 . 9/22/2010
LOLz - thick headed oblivious Shin at his best XD
Blue-Sapphire1 chapter 2 . 8/22/2010
hahahaha..love it..3 well written.. very imaginative.. out of the ordinary..;P hahaha.
Jikage chapter 2 . 6/16/2010
LMAO! This was really, really interesting. I just recently started watching Eyeshield 21, or more like marathoning it, and I'm still stuck on the first season where the anime and manga are both drawn strangely. But I know in the future the animation will get better, so it drives me to continue watching it.

What I like about this is that I know every character. You didn't indulge in too much into the new seasons, just enough for newcomers to understand. Everything was in character, and it wasn't overly cheesy. Great job, I really wish I could've started earlier in this fandom. :D
PERMANENT DEACTIVATED ACCOUNT chapter 2 . 3/3/2010
Loved this. Very funny. Hahahaha, Hiruma is the reason for nighttime, mountains, the oceans, the insanity of squirrels, the abundance of the seven sins, and gay porn. WOW. :D
SociopathLover chapter 2 . 2/6/2010
Oh god. This is so awesome! Why haven't I read this before? They work so perfectly as Sins and Virtues. I loved Hiruma sending Shin the gay porn at the end. X3 Hiruma would totally do that.
firedraygon chapter 2 . 12/25/2009
Haha, too awesome. I love everyone's advice! And how Shin's so completely oblivious to everything except training. XDD; Poor Sena, how'd he fall for the guy? :O

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acyp chapter 2 . 12/22/2009
My favourite line:

“In my day…women used to wear the split-peach hairstyle…”

I started cracking up for no reason in my room. Thanks for that! Hahahaha...

Well, humourous concept, written rather well and nice loopholes and all. You've got a thriving imagination there. Good job.
copycat-capycot chapter 2 . 12/9/2009
OHMIGOD ANGEL!SHIN.

(And I fell in love with Satan!Hiruma. Lawl. xD)
fanalisse chapter 2 . 8/7/2009
Lol. Hilarious. XD
fanalisse chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Ahh the casting fits so perfectly! XD

"He picked up the frozen Sena, slung him on his left shoulder, and walked out the door.

Hiruma began cackling. “Bring him back when you’re done!”" Lol.
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