|Reviews for Fated Dance|
| Julix121 chapter 2 . 3/8/2009
That was really good, I really like the way you write. I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Marked but not Forsaken chapter 2 . 3/6/2009
This is very good, so far original plot line, but I think the school plot is fine, no need to add the dream-eater in as well, but if you really want to, then you should add a little more detail, it goes from brilliant story to average story back to brilliant story. also, if you have too much going on it makes it hard to concentrate.
aside from all my annoying critsisms, ood plot. i luv the conflict between stephanie and gabriel. personally, im very attatched to the name gabriel, it just creates that smexy feeling, u know?
anyways, keep writing and update as soon as you can! dont wait for friday!
| JadedFoxFire chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
I like this...this is becoming intriguing!
Please update soon.
| DrEamINGfoxSHAdowS chapter 2 . 2/28/2009
Hmm...very interesting. Very interesting
| JadedFoxFire chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Very nicely done. I look forward to an update.