Reviews for Allocations |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This made me think of one of the old Trek books where they travel through the gate way and meet Spocks son. His son is such a powerful empath he was able to kill a Romulan by making him afraid. Some stories are so well written they are cannon in my head and this fits for me:D |
![]() ![]() So a hellish commie world order , you own nothing and is happy" ,I guess, not only for O'Bidens USA but us all. No thanks. THAT UTOPIA seems like something I would prefare never happening? Poor Earth. |
![]() ![]() This is, quite simply, the best Sarek/Amanda story that I've ever read. You've got to post this at ! -Leslie ;))) Fish |
![]() ![]() ![]() so, I just binged this story for the secons time... your writing style is so addivtive, polished and the plot was so well done and instigating. I rather enjoyed reading it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a richly detailed world. You'd give George R. R. Martin a run for his money in that department. I'm glad that you added in that last part, that "there's more to this than making an example of [Amanda]". It feels a little unbelievable that Amanda would lose her Earth citizenship because of breaking the allocation rules. So, I kept being pulled out of the story each time that possibility was mentioned. But, if there's a conspiracy...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying. Resuming Ch 32 |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fun read, loved the Andorian factor ;-) Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() A step up from engaged but not quite married is betrothed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As a human womsn I'm just as clueless as a Vulcan about the signals of dresses and clothes and has just dressed classic to be sure of no misunderstandings At least I knew there was a language I wasn't in on ..! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel personally attacked by that last line it's so intense. In a good way don't get me wrong. I'm so ready for this story to eat up all my time and sanity. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I didn't know I needed this until I found it and now I am ever so happy that I did. This is a work of art you magnificent thing you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() not sure if I have reviewed before, but this is my second reading and is still one of my favorite S/A origin stories around! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice job. This was a great, convincing read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! A great story and, near the end, a detour into sci fi genetics. I love it! |