|Reviews for Please Help Me|
| Queen of Everyday chapter 3 . 11/25/2012
That wasn't how it happened. Besides, Alice can't see Nessie so her vision went blank not full.
| piagurl chapter 3 . 12/4/2010
please! i hope you continue it! its getting so good :) i hope you make it alice's pov again and see her visions
| Edwards.Home.Gurrl.Amy.XxX chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
Omg this is amazing! I was so annoyed when they didnt include these parts in breaking dawn! Continue!
| Little Miss Cullen Cutie chapter 3 . 9/17/2009
Oh, I loved it! It totally fits into the book, too, like it's a "missing chapter" or something! My favorite thing is the part with Alice, that's SO cool! Please update soon!
~Little Miss Cullen Cutie~
| crazysalright chapter 2 . 4/1/2009
Good job! I'd love to see you continue this farther!
| Mrs.DamonS chapter 2 . 3/20/2009
that's really good, i always wanted to know how the conversation went between her and Rose, that's really good, ou should come up with something new for it.
| Daughters of Night chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
SWEET JOB DUDE! i always wondered what happened in that phone call...
| James018 chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
This scene is something I certainly would have liked to have seen in Breaking Dawn, and I think you did it just about perfectly. Well done.