|Reviews for A Shadow In The Past|
| ciara512 chapter 3 . 3/5/2009
Love this story so far, the first chapter had me in tears and the others had me laughing! I like the way Oliver has a sister who's best friends with Katie! Well done, update soon please! Oh and I'm from Europe and scrimmage is fine! :D xx
| Maryalice chapter 3 . 3/3/2009
Hello...it's me again lol
I liked this chapter better then the others, so keep going )
I didn't find major errors, except maybe in the end when she said angle, I don't think you mean angle, maybe ankle?
English isn't my first language so...
Well update soon, want to see how it ends xD
| Maryalice chapter 2 . 2/26/2009
I found this story after reading the one-shot (Which I really liked, by the way. Although I think the end was a bit strange, was hoping something different -but don't mind me-)
I think this story is good, I'm enjoying it so far, but...you killed her! I understand it was important to the plot and everything, I really do! (*Still hoping she's alive*)
I've already shared my thoughts. keep writing )