Reviews for Lost Beyond Croggon
waltrluvr chapter 2 . 12/5/2009
Please, I beg you, UPDATE! This story is amazing and highly addictive!

In my oppinion, one of your best...
xLaramiex chapter 3 . 9/19/2009
wowee D Awesome! Ardina is luberly ) I love all the mystery in this chapter, it's great. And I love the conversation between Maerad and Kayla -grins- It's quite sweet.
Eleve Osirian chapter 2 . 4/5/2009
Great job, I can't wait for more!

To me, you showed just how ugly our world is compared to the world Alison created. It actually made me sad (
xLaramiex chapter 2 . 4/5/2009
love it ) I noticed a couple more mistakes this time but I'm too lazy and ill to go find them again to point them out. Sorry.

Anyway, a very good second chapter. I like the bit where the guy saves her, it really sums up her attitude towards men.

I look forward to chapter 3 (hint, hint)
xLaramiex chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
It will linger in my dreams -grins- good stuff. I am already impatient for the next chapter xD
Eleve Osirian chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Great job! I love the fact that you've kept Maerad in character, despite her leaving Edil-Amarandh to visit our world. I noticed a few words repeated, "existence" being one of them, but no major mistakes.

Keep on this track and your story is going to be brilliant! )

-Kiaga