|Reviews for Stay Just a Little Longer|
| misticbutterfly chapter 4 . 6/23/2009
I loved the out take.. who couldn't get enough of Edward... um not me :)
| Jazz-Likes-Fiction chapter 4 . 6/16/2009
Very good story! This one and the other one! I cried, I'm such a baby! Keep writing! I would love to read more stories from you!
| keepingupwiththekids chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
| Starrynytex chapter 4 . 5/18/2009
Great great lemon! I love this outtake!
Then again...I love Edward and Bella lemons so..
But it was definitely written well!
| Lisalove83 chapter 4 . 5/12/2009
I quite liked this outtake, maybe because I love smutty ExB...yeah, that's probably it. Hahahaha, keep it up!
| melferd chapter 4 . 5/8/2009
Um..Guh. *shakes head** These kids need to work things out and stay together.
| shesuchacharmer chapter 4 . 4/29/2009
I'm jealous! I want to be Bella! lol
| Homebody chapter 4 . 4/25/2009
I read Stay and came to these outtakes through the link on your profile. I'm not disappointed! I very much enjoy your writing style. The way you incorporate humor into the story makes it so much better. And you're right about being visually descriptive. Putting the vision in a reader's mind is a skill so may lack. Anyway, looking foraward to more of whatever you write!
| halfadash chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
this chapter so belongs in the main story...i loved it.
| Aurabee chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
| mad4hugh chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
Well, that was just f**king wonderful! You sure this is your first fanfic? You've definitely got a talent for writing erotic sex scenes!
Seems inadequate to say: thank you!
| Naomitron chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
I really enjoyed this alternate ending! In all honesty, I think either of these (including the one you chose) would have worked for closing off the chapter. You did a wonderful job with them both.
| WhisperedHopes chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
Beautiful, thanks for sharing the outtakes :)
| vampskies chapter 4 . 3/16/2009
Yikes, hot hot hotness. I love when characters that are so in love with each other have passionate sex! :)
| evenstar710 chapter 4 . 3/15/2009
And thank you for all the nice Edward dreams I am sure to have tonight.