Reviews for Stay Just a Little Longer
Midnight Cougar chapter 5 . 9/9/2014
I don't think I've ever reviewed any these outtakes, while I've read them all...a few times lol, but it was neat to see this different NYE. Thank you for posting this.
mimimgr chapter 6 . 9/9/2014
loved the outtakes, makes me want to read "stay" again :)
tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 6 . 9/9/2014
Great chapters.
shaz308 chapter 6 . 9/8/2014
I would gave thought tat that would have been the one moment in their lives they would want to share with their family. After all they chose the guest list. They should gave gone away and gotten married and after the honeymoon come ack and had a big party. That would gave confused the paps.
cullenmeadow chapter 6 . 9/8/2014
So lovely! Thanks :)
Maplestyle chapter 6 . 9/8/2014
Loved this!
Just Sus chapter 6 . 9/8/2014
Ahhhhh...loved this!
shaz308 chapter 5 . 9/8/2014
Lucky he finally came to his senses. Poor Bella.
Maplestyle chapter 5 . 9/8/2014
OMG I loved this! I still read that story on occasion! Thanks for sharing this!
Taylor9901 chapter 5 . 9/8/2014
Awe. I loved it.
ChristyWIX chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
That was a wonderful lemon . . . pretty hot one too.
ChristyWIX chapter 3 . 7/18/2014
I liked that outtake. And, I can clearly see when the light bulb went off in your head and you scrapped this and started over . . . with him waking up over hearing the 'lawn mower'. It is kind of fascinating to learn how the minds of authors start off in one direction . . . and then change off into another. Both the original and this one were great. Thanks for sharing this.
ChristyWIX chapter 2 . 7/15/2014
This was really a fun version. I liked it all. I'm glad you cut the part about Alice forcing underwear on Bella in what was basically their first meeting of one another. However, I really hope you added it back into the story in a later chapter . . . as it deserved to se the light of day in a real chapter, not just an outtake. I really liked when Bella told Edward that they will like him and not to worry. As, it finally showed that she may have strength in her after all . . . something that hasn't showed up yet in the real story.
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
I actually really liked this version of chapter thirteen. I liked the way the conversation between Alice and Edward flowed in it. It wasn't as angry as the other version. AxE were kind of pissy with each other in the real ch13 and this one they were more sibling like. I liked that better. Although, the real ch13 had the better, 'I'm going to marry her', moment by far. This one just merely had him think it. I also like the real ch13 version of Angela and Edward entering the store together . . . having met in the parking lot . . . much better than this version of her already behind the counter. Still fun to read the alternate.
jus2read chapter 4 . 6/6/2014
So cool seeing how the chapter was before it was changed slightly- fascinating to see a story grow amd change like that :)
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