Reviews for For the Price of Looking
Proper the Incredible chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Awesome
The Cake Genius chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I love how even during sex, they're still fighting and calculating and, underneath it all, Light is sort of confused. Very well-written... as well as sexy. ;)
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
wow. this is just intense and it left me breathless. I just love love love the opposition they felt for each other. I mean wow. it's like they hate nd love too much that it is hard to see where one begins and the other ends. It's all mash and mesh into one big thing that is L and Light. I just love love lvoe the last line: "Actually, the problem might come to be one day, when L is nothing but a gravestone and rotting ash, learning how to not see him." Yep, Light is in too deep that he can't dig himself out even if he could. Again just love love it! :D
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 4/10/2011
Woah, that was intense! That last line was perfect, was so powerful that I’ll probably be

thinking of it for a while. Great job!
Rosepetal987 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
-Ever love when you get so into a FanFiction that you blank out then some one tries to talk to you, even worse when some one hands you a phone!- Now... back to those sounds... 3

The ending was so beautiful, and I actually oddly can see, -does some times get so out of it that she looses sight to some level- it was sweet, hot, and really well written. Light in such a way trully amuses me, and seeing L so cylindrically off and into something it trully enjoyable in it's own way.
scarymovie chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
Very hot, very IC and also, you know, hot XD Loved it!
tth chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
heheh. what violent and delicious souls.

by the way, whatever happened to your unfinished stories? have they been cut short, never to become anything more than they are- like a cocoon torn open early (i'm feeling metaphorical), or is there still hope?

don't tell me, i want to be surprised (or else greatly disappointed).
kitoriwitch613 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
Wow, amazing! I love how the story is not just about the sex but the mind games they play on each other. Very well written!
Splintered Star chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Gah, took me damned long enough didn't it? *shakes head* Right. Been a busy month.

This is an interesting little fic... I like how you deal with the emotional/psychological implications. I, personally, would focus less on the sex itself and more on those implications, but that's purely a matter of taste. As it is it works fine.

The characterization is fantastic - L smiling and mocking and lying so well, and Light laughing and playing along, more entranced than he's ever been before. Light trusts him, but only as far as knowing that this isn't L's avenue of attack - and even if L attacks him, it'll be worth it.

I love the parenthetical bits! They're such a nice stylistic flourish, and the last one is So Bloody Fantastic. They make the style a bit more abstract than you normally write, but I can rock that. *nod*

I like it. Nicely done.

S
Deus3xMachina chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
Ahh... nothing like a nice, cathartic, and best of all kinky PWP in the wee hours of the morning when sleep would look attractive to a saner person.

Although I've noticed that, with really good authors, PWP stops feeling like PWP and starts feeling like something more. Porn With Plot, maybe...? This was one of those stories, I think.
sweet.octOber.kisses chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
...

/.O
teacrumb chapter 1 . 2/20/2009
GUH. You remain the master, madam. :D
bookenworum chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
they're both so mean to each other, yet they can't stop the desire.

that's a great element and I really felt it in this one-shot :D

and the blind fold only added to that part :)

great writing as always :p

bookenworum
The Wandering Cat chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Whoa. You blew my mind. You wrote in such impressive detail that I can perfectally picture it in my mind.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
that was very, very, very good. thought provoking porn is one of the best things there is. what is so great about L and Light is that half the kink comes from the fact that is them, and the way they interact with each other, and you have shown that really well.
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