|Reviews for Does It Hurt?|
| tanithlipsky chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
| Mengsk chapter 1 . 4/3/2010
It hurt to read it. Deep down.
| Blitz-the-Falling-Blunder chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
:( Poor Goz.
Negaduck needs his butt kicked.
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I hope NegaMegavolt fry Negaduck for hurting this little, nice girl.
Keep the good writing.
| GOOD STORY XAVIER11FUSE.NET chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO PUT CHPTER 2 UP BECAUSE I WANT TO SEE WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND IF GOSALYN IS GOING TO BE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER AND IF DARKWING IS GOING TO SAVE NEGAGOSALYN FROM NEGDUCK AND THIS IS GETING TO BE A GOOD STORY AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
| LADYMALLARD chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Hi, You certainly captured the flavor of the situation, Negaducks anger and Negagosalyn's fear are well represented, I am not a fan of any kind of abuse, but in this case it is a part of Darkwing's evil twin's character, his temper and penchant for lashing out are well known, and so in that way you have done an excellent representational view of the way he would act toward a poor defenceless child, with no one there to protect her. So in that way you were spot on, and that is what I am complimenting you on. You have a great writing ability, drawing the reader in to your subject story, Good job.
| pokefan366 chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I know Negaduck's evil, but to stike his own daughter? THAT is truly evil. Great Story!
| Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
Oh! The poor little ducky! That was so sad. Great story, Trish!