|Reviews for In His Sister's Arms|
| xGuardianxAngelx chapter 2 . 9/29/2009
naw why did edward have to ruin all the fun ( ah well, i liked the story, good job
| TsukiNoMikoBrazil chapter 2 . 8/31/2009
Damn! but they didn't deserve that aw I am so sad now../
| Geezorbee chapter 2 . 6/30/2009
Ehh... bummer -.-'
| Geezorbee chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
Hmm... Alice goes "Edward wont be back for at least the weekend"... 10minutes later he shows up? Alice's foresight suxx lol ,
| twilight1alice chapter 2 . 6/27/2009
O wow that didnt have a happy ending did it
| callmeCarter0807 chapter 1 . 5/17/2009
whats gonna happen?
| jjgabona chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
wtf happens next?write more...and soon!
| Tim chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
i think its good. i really hope you continue it soon
| Team Alice-Bella chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
bum bum bum! lol OH. MY. GOD. EDWARD'S A PERV! LOL I LOVE IT CANT WAIT FOR MORE!
| Sammicles chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
i have to agree whole heartedly with you alice and bella belong together i love your writing its so, it just draws me in and i don't want to stop reading it i love it!
| Night-Echos chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
| Kimmy chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
its really good..
you sholud post more
| Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
gr! i hate Edward so much... getting in the way of the greatness that is Bellice! gr! well the idea is pretty good but i think you might want to look into getting a beta to go over your stuff cause sometimes it takes someone other then yourself reading it to see whatever mistakes are there. well other then that good! )
| cuteshortie190 chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
hahaha nice...i think you should cont. this story its really good, and edward just had to interup the good part :( lol oh well. :) love the story. i hope u decided to cont it.
| Alexawynters chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I like it and thought it was good, but you might want to revise it a little bit. Some parts don't quite make sense, and there are some grammatical errors as well. However, other than that, it was pretty good. More please?