Reviews for Not Meant To Be
Cardamoms3 chapter 28 . 9/25/2017
I've been appreciating this story. A lot of the characters are crazily selfish and self-absorbed, but that can be. Realistic reflection of people, particularly people in the 20s. But I don't get the development in this chapter - Edward is tortured about having his child taken from him, so he takes a child from someone else? That doesn't compute. Oh well - I guess two selfish, self-absorbed people deserve each other. Too bad for Fin though.
athome Jo chapter 30 . 9/5/2017
Heartbreaking. I'm so glad you went with the happy ending you chose, but this was an incredible alternate ensing. Well done!
athome Jo chapter 29 . 9/5/2017
athome Jo chapter 28 . 9/5/2017
This story is awesome!
Guest chapter 20 . 8/3/2017
I do feel bad for Bella but mostly just find her weak and pathetic. Edward even more so.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/3/2017
Bella needs therapy...
Guest chapter 8 . 8/3/2017
I feel bad for Bella. She doesn't seem to value herself much.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/3/2017
Guest chapter 3 . 8/3/2017 your point with this story to make the readers hate your characters...
Guest chapter 22 . 7/18/2017
bellashould have kicked alices ass for talking to her that way.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/18/2017
Wife AND a kid? And still obviously trying to hide from his nails? Wow hes super tacky!
JustARead chapter 25 . 2/22/2017
JustARead chapter 22 . 2/22/2017
Dun Dun Dun
JustARead chapter 21 . 2/22/2017
JustARead chapter 20 . 2/22/2017
Good plan. She needs to get away.
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