Reviews for The Kitsune and the Hebi
MrSwaggafied chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Very Good! Loved it! I always prefer Naru-Hina stories, but I like trying new things out! :P
Bryan H chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
pyroboy353 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
i liked this one alot but you should revise it and make a story out of it like who the other girls were and go into greater detail
Sandaime Hokage chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
Nice little fic and the epilogue was nice to have a little closure,

Peace Out

Sandaime Hokage
ArchAng3l chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Very good story. I hope for a second chapter.
Tenma Sosei chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Great story, bht seriously whats with all the daughters, no being sexist but in alot of stories, naruto and the girl usually have girls
Lycan91 chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
i love it. nuther great story. YAY LEMONS! :)
Jonathan Shapiro chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Very Schizo writing, and this is why you proofread and don't trust spell check
MasterBrattan chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
dude, please pick a name and stick with it. i've lost count how many times you've changed it. btw, still love the stories
TenTailedAnarkyBeast chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
awesome I like these
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Awesome story
Ronin Kenshin chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
awsome anko fic i like how you didnt make anko just a phsicotic slut who loves blood and intresting about the kid i always wanted to see a story with there kids just to msee what would happen anywho great work
dotJKLO chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Too fast for my liking. More or be bombarded with cookies.


Will make you laugh funny.
daniel 29 chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
except for the 18 years later and the little paragraph accompaning it the story is like the lemon chapter of naruto and anko