|Reviews for Brother's Keeper|
| annea101 chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
| Inumaru12 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
My first thought when reading this: "Oh my god, Cory Matthews from Boy Meets World, I loved that show!" XDDD I dunno if that was coincidental or not, but I got a good chuckle out of it, so thanks.
Anyway, loved seeing Theodore stand up for his bro, very sweet. :)
| xXxShiningDarknessxXx chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Awwwwww! That was so cute! The brotherly love was beautiful! I love it good job! I didn't know Alvin did that much, no wonder he's tired. Good job! Keep up the good work!
| timme chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
Poor Cory though. he really was being honest. maybe he was wrong, and didnt' know enough about it, but how could he? Theodore didn't even bother to truly explain when it was brought up, just said "you don't get it". from the facts cory had, he was in the right. even then, theo took far too much offense, wasn't cory trying to apologize?
| Victory's Wonder chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
I absolutely LOVE this story! Perfect amount of... all the right stuff!
Go Teddy! Woo-hoo! XD
| darth-korbo chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Very nicely done. I loved the descriptions and side stories you stuck in there; it fleshed out the characters quite a bit. Good characterization; grammar was overall excellent. One spelling gripe: "Eleanor." Other than that, brilliant. Hope to hear another story from you soon.
| The Owl's Pen chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
Oh WOW... This was absolutely amazing! I'm actually speechless here, so I'll try to round up my thoughts and compose a useful review... Only one correction, so I'll get that out of the way first. It is spelled "Eleanor," as I'm sure at least one person has already said *smiles*
I loved seeing this side of Theodore, this intensely loyal and articulate little guy. The story was really more about Alvin (whom I LOVE!), but we get to see it through the lens of Theodore's admiration and respect for him. You've taken the character of Alvin and honed him to his most intense form. "Music was his life - used to be, currently was, and would forever be." BEST LINE TO DESCRIBE ALVIN, EVER! I liked seeing this obsessive side of Alvin, too, the part of him that almost agonizes over hitting the notes, working the crowd, writing to keep up at the insistence of his soul. I've been trying to work with his character myself, and this piece has been a HUGE inspiration!
Getting back to Theodore: You have defintely written him as he should be when he is a young adult. He has a clear view of the world, no illusions about what it really takes to be a rockstar, and a gracious sense of justice. Theodore really gets it, and it must make him a little sad that others can't see his brother as he sees him... and yet that is the priviledge that family members have with one another, isn't it?
The bit with the cake was absolutely perfect! I love that it just sort of appears, like another little bit of Alvin's magic. And Simon's knowing look and smile pull his entire character into the story without any dialogue at all!
You could not have made this more perfect. Don't change a thing, because this is in my favorites now! Thank you so much for such a great read, and please keep writing about these guys! Looking forward to more,
The Owl's Pen
| Shadows-Rose99 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Aw That's cute! X33 I love these kind of stories that are filled with the chipmunks defending eachother and being all brotherly! It's so cute! X3
| DecemberSaturdayFan chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
This was a awesome story,your a geat writer, and I love the brotherly love,and Alvin.
| ChipmunksFan chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
I think this may be one of the best Chipmunks fics I've read. There are few out there that actually explore the characters within or their family dynamics. Most of the stories I've read just take the characters for granted and spend more energy on the situation they're in. I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I look forward to more from you. Well done!
| Kat chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Holy crap! For your first, it was your best! Don't stop here, keep writing! PLEASE!
| nikki-kun05 chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
I was itching to try writing for this fandom too, so I go out and look for some good stories and I find this little gem! I've got to say this is probably one of the best AaTC stories I've read. I enjoyed it a lot. The characterizations and content was just so good. There was emotion and I can just see the characters doing this. Awesome job! :)
| Quazie89 chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Very nice story! I thought you captured the characters pretty well and I could see Theodore standing up for his brother like that.
| Jack Mirembe chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
this was awesome. i've read a few alvin defends theo, but theo defending alvin was totally cool. really liked it. :)
| Yami-sama42 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Aw! This is so cute! You're such an awesome author! You got the characters down quite nicely. You should write for the Chipmunks more often. I like the brotherly bonds you show. I love stories like this. They're so sweet and cute. Keep up the great work!