|Reviews for I Make My Own Story|
| misherukuro chapter 13 . 5/17
Good read thanks for sharing your writing.
| bassoongirl14 chapter 13 . 11/7/2016
I really love this so far!
| JOHN DRACO MALFO chapter 5 . 11/25/2015
| Merlenyn chapter 10 . 10/29/2015
*whine whine* why is there no more to this? XD I love it so far! Seeing Trowa and Harry being drawn to each other is awesome, and Trowa with his quiet calm personality and all... that scene with the omlete and Trowa touching Harry's face then and commenting on his eyes... *SQUEE!* and the reactions of the other pilots when they noticed the very slight blush on Trowa's face. lol Then I also wonder what would have happened had Duo not gone barging into the room when he did to wake Harry up only to find Trowa there... Would Trowa have continued to just sit there and stroke Harry's face or would his hands have wandered? Would he have kissed Harry? Or is he still a bit too confused on those feelings to do anything more than touch his face? Of course now I'm half expecting Duo to eventually try locking the two of them in a closet sometime... XD
As for the story and the terrorists and all... oooooo scary! I wonder who the mysterious man is? Is he an OC character that idolized Treize, or some side character from the series that was little talked about or seen? I'm assuming the creep sent people to Harry's apartment to look for info on him, I hope Harry had his magical stuff hidden. Maybe shrunk or something... unless his books and the like remained with Hermione since he wouldn't really need them in a muggle area? Though his cloak... where was that hiding? Hopefully the baddies didn't find it and go "what the heck is this? hey it makes you invisible? score!" and steal it and perhaps try and find ways to replicate the effects with technology... That's the last thing the baddies need, a way to use magic or replicate it's effects to continue their reign of terror.
I'm also wondering if Hedwig will decide to go looking for her master after hearing from Ron and Hermione that he's not in the apartment where he wasn't allowed to have pets? It'd be rather hilarious if she swooped out of the sky and smacked Harry with her wings and then nipped his ear hard. Of course she'd risk being shot by one of the guys unless Harry saw her first and told them she was ok and that she was his pet... I think she and Trowa would get along wonderfully though. lol
Will the pool scene continue next chapter? Perhaps seeing some of the other guys get in the pool, like Trowa? That has all the earmarks of more fun awkwardness between Trowa and Harry as well... lol
Anywho, hopefully one day you'll update this again so we can all read what happens next! :) Happy writing!
| anthea tronchard step chapter 13 . 4/18/2015
if I understand correctly, they are "magically" compatible as you wrote in one of previous chapters that Throwa has some magic. So this mean Harry will be able to become pregnant if or when they will do what a couple do?
| tamashiyuki chapter 13 . 5/7/2014
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| Kanikan chapter 13 . 9/17/2013
It's such a great story, certain aspects of it seem a little off, such as how Harry is using his magic and the logic behind not using more, but other than that quite enjoyable, it's sad there hasn't been an update, and am guessing it's been abandoned, though I wouldn't mind being proved wrong in that regards . Hope at some point in time you decide to continue.
| Mashkai30 chapter 13 . 4/8/2013
Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
| Barrel of Monkeys chapter 13 . 3/22/2013
This was just so sweet and lovely. The interactions between Harry and Trowa is innocently adorable. Harry is such as big 'I'm self-sufficient man who can take care of myself' type of person, but as soon as he locks eyes with Trowa he turns into a blushing stuttering pile of putty. I really wish this were complete, mainly because I want yo read more Trowa/Harry and secondly because I want to what's happening with that Damian guy.
| CrowNoYami chapter 13 . 3/3/2013
I miss this story so much, please i know that you are probably busy but please update and if you can not please have someone adopt it. thank you
| rianifitria chapter 13 . 2/21/2013
It's been 3 yrs since last update, so I'm not sure if it's continued. I just wanted to say that I like this story very very much. It's nice.
The development between the pilots and Harry is rather nice. Slow and steady. Because that's how it's supposed to be with people as paranoid as them.
Harry's coming to term with his attraction to Trowa is nice too. Especially since it really highlight how awkward he is in anything that has 'love' and 'affection' in it.
The part where you spoke of Une, Shacklebolt, Ron, Hermione, Anna and the bad guys are very nice too. So everything will converge in the end and I'm not running blind but more anticipatory.
Overall, I like it. Just want to tell you that.
| Aldwyntor chapter 13 . 2/3/2013
love love looove it!plz plz update soon!
| Bobette13 chapter 6 . 1/31/2013
I'm loving this fic and the slow relationship building, but please, please don't put ANs in the middle of a fic. It's distracting and completely disrupts the flow of a fic, especially at charged moments (like Harry's 'interrogation'). Either work the information in them into the fic (like the bit with peanut rings, I've certainly never heard of 'em here in Canada) or stick it at the end of the chapter (like the clarification that you'd messed with the canon timeline or the bit about the not-so made up address).
Sorry, I hate writing reviews like this, I'll try to leave a more positive one in a few chapters, I really do love this fic so far.