|Reviews for It's a Romantic Conquest, Haruhi Chan!|
| seabroth chapter 25 . 10/22/2013
I think this was done very, very well. Sadly I think it slipped towards out-of-character-ness in the Sailor Moon and ghost-trauma conversations, and when Haruhi got mad at Kyon. I also think Itsuki stuttered too much at the time of his confession (I think in real life, one would pause a lot in embarrassment rather than stutter, but once you get the initial confession out you can talk more normally). I thought it was really great just how much it took for Itsuki to confess, I kept expecting it to happen sooner but you did it really well. Another general tip I have is that the dialogue and inner monologue tends to go on too long without a description of the background, the reader loses track of how much time is passing or where exactly they are.
Anyway, I stayed up all night just reading this fanfiction of yours. Now I'm off to see if you have any others. It's probably too much to expect that you'd still be willing to write for Suzumiya, but a man can dream I suppose… Thanks so much for the fic.
| alycat63 chapter 7 . 10/14/2013
| Lori Konosuna chapter 25 . 9/8/2013
I love your story, it's so cute! :D
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| Olive Master chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
| Olive Master chapter 12 . 7/4/2013
Itsuki Kagamine. And I like your story.
| historicMelatonin chapter 25 . 6/21/2013
Loved this story! Great job!
| isa-kagamine chapter 25 . 6/5/2013
por favor haz una secuela!
| Snapper chapter 25 . 1/24/2013
All done then... well it was a very good story, the characters all worked well in the situations you put them in and the plot was very gripping. even though i don't want to say it, that was a good ending place. i would have loved to see everyone
s reations when they realized that the boys got together though. Maybe a oneshot sequel :) ...
| Snapper chapter 24 . 1/24/2013
Finally! Kyon gets it. Took him long enough...