Reviews for The Fox Hidden in the Leaves
narutoyugitofuu chapter 70 . 3/17
NARUKUSHI
HaruXKyouyaLaxusXLucy4EVER chapter 14 . 1/17
NO
HaruXKyouyaLaxusXLucy4EVER chapter 4 . 1/17
OMFG TSUNADE X NARUTO WOULD BE GOOD FOR THIS FANFIC
Run Around With A KF Lover XD chapter 3 . 10/1/2014
The swirl is the Uzumaki clan symbol not the Namikaze clan.
Zabon95 chapter 20 . 9/16/2014
Curse you, I'm supposed to sleep but now I want ice cream... -.-
Zabon95 chapter 14 . 9/16/2014
For a first fic, this is REALLY good, only problem I have/thing you can do to make it even better is to describe how a (more important) person looks like. And the occasional misspelling, like a i where it's supposed to be a u.
But other than that, really nicely done :)
DarkDrago chapter 24 . 8/26/2014
You made a mistake in this chapter the four tails is a monkey. Gobi is named KokuĊ and is a dolphin or Saiken is a bipedal slug!
tinywhispers1 chapter 39 . 7/15/2014
I find myself put off but also intrigued by this fiction. As a female when I read stuff like 6 to 8 inch clits and 2 inch long nipples, I have to shudder a little. After seeing the picture you mentioned at the end of this chapter, I'll just keep envisioning the women as I do and not that creepy monstrosity on deviant art.

Lol, but really, this story is interesting and I can't wait to finish it. It is also well written. I have read many 'stroke' fics where men make the women get larger breasts and butts and the male character is hung like a horse but that is all it is. This one, at least I feel, has more substance than that.

Not saying it doesn't have the stuff in the above statement because it does but I wouldn't read a Naruto harem fic if I didn't want the females wanting Naruto's D all the time.

Alright, have a nice day, I'm going back to reading.
MythicGR66 chapter 37 . 6/27/2014
Dude you needed to cut back with the beach ball size boobs, hell Tsunade and Hinata in Cannon during the Shippuden Arc were very large to begin with and it fit there body's beautifully but the way your describing them now is quite grotesque and whats with the huge clits on every one, dude it you want to write fetish porn I wont judge just go to an adult fan-fiction site for that. Sex has always been a Grey area on this site, but when you get in to the weird stuff thats when you go to the adult site's.
MythicGR66 chapter 36 . 6/27/2014
her C was half a foot long are you trying to include Futa girls in to this fic,
MythicGR66 chapter 34 . 6/27/2014
WAIT! I remember Naruto saying he wanted Hinata to be his first as he would be to her, thats the whole reason he's turned down every one else's advances.

Well until after him and Hinata are married in about two months.

Also you really needed to cut back on the whole breast the size of beach balls fetish you have, it's getting quite disturbing, this isn't a fetish doujin (i think thats the word) site here.
MythicGR66 chapter 3 . 6/25/2014
Um you do know the red Spiral is the symbol for Uzushiogakure (Village Hidden in the Whirling Tides) the home of the Uzumaki clan and the first ever hidden village in the Shinobi nations.

Second when was Naruto made a chunin in this story, since he was still a Genin before he left?
WhatIsBook2 chapter 70 . 5/17/2014
If you dont mind what is the name of book 2 i would luv to know i loved this storry so much!
Wolfone10 chapter 23 . 5/6/2014
Otherwise Hinata isn't as loyal as she says.
Wolfone10 chapter 22 . 5/6/2014
This chapter pisses me off a little bit, Hinata isn't even married to him and is already contemplating CHEATING on him? I mean COME on.. this is stupid!... If Kuerenai, wants to be with Hinata she should already know she HAS to be with her husband otherwise it's cheating.. so get rid of the older girl or bring her into the fold.
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