EGBERT I’m crying

I hate you for this chapter. But I love you tho

I would simply die if I told some guy he couldn’t dazzle me with his “sexytime tractor beam” aloud.

I haven’t even started this chapter yet. The Meat Sweats is already killing me. I can tell I’m going to thoroughly enjoy this

Omg I couldn't stop laughing

I read this while fighting the flu. Laughing and then hacking up a lung sucked, but it was worth it. Loved this story.

all the mental discussions with the girls had me in stitches this chapter. they want what they want!

I loved reading these two. Your writing is phenomenal, funny and intuitive. Hope you’re doing well :)

This is a cute story and all, but it’s dragging. I like snark, but this is over kill to the point of annoyance. No one can be on like this 24/7. Who would take her seriously?

Anyway, I think with some editing and plot progression this could be a really good story.

It’s taking me a long time to get through this story. I don’t know the plot needs to move

I smoked once and thought my boyfriend was an alien shape shifter watching me so his alien race could hurt me later.

Making Tanya a cat is such a read. I love it.

Is It Me Or The thing at the AN looks like a creepy face

ROTFLMFAO

Love this FF

i love love love WIP but something about this part when they get married has bugged me for years since first reading it. and now i realized what it is; i cant really blame bella for freaking out and having doubts because beyond the two of them marrying, they really didnt discuss basic vital matters between them such as living arrangements and such - both of them just assumed what's it going to be just as bella says in this chapter.

i just had to say that. still, i adore this story and something i go back to reading every so often. thank you!

I’ve lost track of the number of times I’ve reread this but i can’t help loving this Bella. She makes me feel sane