Reviews for End of the Innocence
Ozlex chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
DEAN KILLED BAMBI! I have to admit though Dean's still cuter than Bambi. Great story I'm loving the ansgt filled Dean centric Wee'chesterness. Keep up the awesome work :D
nochickflickmoments chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
hey I really like the direction of this story, because either the stories shows us wee-dean as worrier

or brotherly fluff, without the hunting aspect; like the characterisation of dean in this mid-state between child and hunter

what bothers me a little is the way sam is behaving because of the way the series introduced us to sam and his learning of the hunting world,

i don't think he would react like this, he would probably be worried and he wasn't innocent anymore.

I'm glad that John is the tough hunter we know, but he is also gentle with dean.
annie200 chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
You captured Dean's vulnerability beautifully here. He's no longer a child but he hasn't quite learned to master his "game face" yet. And he's so desperate for John's approval at the same time as he realises that "father of the year" hasn't even paid enough proper attention to see he's injured.

At the same time you made me feel for John, not wanting to scar Dean, but completely out of his depth as a parent. Just all so sad.
SamDeanLover28 chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
i like it so far
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