|Reviews for White Flag|
| katelaina1717 chapter 3 . 2/11
Story sounds interesting however Petunia in my mind was still a bad aunt she let an innocent baby sleep in a cuboard work like a slave and let him think his name was boy or freak also Harry got little food so that does not count either - she worried more about herself than him and only when she saw a way out for herself suddenly stood up for him. Also Snape no matter what the book or movies may let one think was a true bastard, James was a bully as a child but he grew up and he even saved Severus once, Severus was the own constructor of his pain - he called Lilly a mudblood, he decided to tell a prophecy to a madman that would kill a innocent child, he only turned spy because of personal guilt that it was Lilly his crush that died had it been Nevill would he still have turned to the other side? And he saw in occlumency lessons that Harry had it hard yet still acted like the kid was spoiled. Lol sorry but I just can't find redemption for him or Petunia - child abuse in any way is never right and thats what they both did and allowed even if at times only mental abuse.
| tamashiyuki chapter 8 . 1/7
| beautyfan0102 chapter 8 . 11/16/2013
really excellent story so far want to see more so please update soon please
as anyone adoption this story yet.
| beauty12 chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
as someone adopted this story yet.
| Rosa Mundi chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
Well, it was a great beginning. If you ever get back to it, I'll be very interested in seeing where you were going with Remus/Moony.
| Rosa Mundi chapter 7 . 3/23/2013
Sooner or later, someone's going to hear "Uncle Remus" and laugh. (Probably stories they don't tell in Britain? Look for Br'er Rabbit on Wikipedia.). Remus Lupin does not look like an Uncle Remus. :D
| Rosa Mundi chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
Ooh, Harry Potter being written by someone British. Cool!
Up until this chapter, I thought Bill and Remus were together.
| Rosa Mundi chapter 3 . 3/23/2013
Wow. I hope Minerva can get de-obliviated. And, nice setup for getting multiple characters out of Britain. I'm glad you're bringing Neville, I'm quite fond of him. Pity we can't bring Luna too. I'd love to see what she thought of Forks.
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 4 . 1/3/2013
Well if Remus WAS a woman, then he could call himself Miriam!
Hmmm, Miriam Mondstrahl...
Has a nice ring to it!
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 5 . 12/4/2012
I'm 100% American, have lived in Florida all my life, and am a Christian(Protestant).
I am NOT, however, and have NEVER been, Homophobic.
It doesn't matter to me if a couple is male/female, male/male, or female/female.
All that matters is that they truly love each other.
The heart goes where it goes.
And it goes of its own free will.
You can't choose for it, and you can't make it change its mind.
| Duky3110 chapter 8 . 3/5/2012
i loved the story so far could u please tell me when someone adopts the story a who so i can carry on reading it please id be really greatful .
| PenNameless1994 chapter 5 . 11/23/2011
Quick comment: I'm a southeastern American, and your generalization is generally correct. Perhaps more than I even know.
| yaoi potter fan chapter 7 . 9/24/2011
you know, i don't care if you spelled them wrong. British way or american way, even if i live in north america, i don't care because i will eventually find out what you meant to write or just go on. i mostly don't care because if i look at any word long enough it looks like it is spelled wrong, even if it is spelled correctly.
| skylion chapter 5 . 9/16/2011
it's all right, loads of people seem to think that about the south. To be honest, while there is some of that, especially in alabama and Tennessee, there's also a lot of people who are democrats through and through. You'd be better off saying Utah though, since there is a lot of homophobic-type people there. Of, course, anywhere you go you're probably going to meet both kinds of people. That has been my experience, and I've lived both in the very deep south and Utah.
| love-of-my-existance chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
I would love to adopt this story! I'm about to have heaps of free you're on my hands so im really wanting to start writing more! If your interested please let me know!