Reviews for White Flag
h0neybunny16 chapter 7 . 4/1
:) yay! I'm glad Harry and Neville got away from all of that but, I'm a bit sad that you haven't updated yet so .. i was wondering if i can adopt this story and i also thought if I do adopt this story that is i'll change a few things but, same plot you know.
anyway let me know if you found someone to adopt this story if you did i'll be willing to support the story and the author :)
Guest chapter 7 . 1/5
I'm so sorry I can't finish this. It's just the thought of SNAPE and RIDDLE and SNAPE and MALFOY makes me sick. No affence go your story but that is just weird.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/5
I NEED to wash my brain! Seriously SNAPE and RIDDLE?! Did you HAVE to scar me?!
Aglover chapter 8 . 11/18/2016
Pleeeeeeezzzzzzzzeeeee let me adopt your story
MattKennedy chapter 8 . 1/7/2015
Interesting story. I especially like how Bill's a part of the story (and his interactions with Remus). :)
RoseHamilton chapter 5 . 12/22/2014
I get that you don't really know much about the south, but it's still quite rude to say that everyone in the South is homophobic. I'm Christian(Catholic to be exact), and I think it's fine for a man to be with a man or a woman to be with a woman. Yes, there are people who are against it, but it's not fair to say that if a person lives in the South they are homophobic. Other than that, I really like this story.
delete-account-please 5424271 chapter 8 . 9/4/2014
Splendid story please update or did anyone adopted yet.
delete-account-please 5237847 chapter 8 . 8/24/2014
Fantastic story sorry to see you put of for adoption did anyone adopted so I can read it.
anthea tronchard step chapter 8 . 5/23/2014 it possible to adopt your fic?
katelaina1717 chapter 3 . 2/11/2014
Story sounds interesting however Petunia in my mind was still a bad aunt she let an innocent baby sleep in a cuboard work like a slave and let him think his name was boy or freak also Harry got little food so that does not count either - she worried more about herself than him and only when she saw a way out for herself suddenly stood up for him. Also Snape no matter what the book or movies may let one think was a true bastard, James was a bully as a child but he grew up and he even saved Severus once, Severus was the own constructor of his pain - he called Lilly a mudblood, he decided to tell a prophecy to a madman that would kill a innocent child, he only turned spy because of personal guilt that it was Lilly his crush that died had it been Nevill would he still have turned to the other side? And he saw in occlumency lessons that Harry had it hard yet still acted like the kid was spoiled. Lol sorry but I just can't find redemption for him or Petunia - child abuse in any way is never right and thats what they both did and allowed even if at times only mental abuse.
tamashiyuki chapter 8 . 1/7/2014
No Continue?
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 8 . 11/16/2013
really excellent story so far want to see more so please update soon please

as anyone adoption this story yet.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 8 . 11/15/2013
as someone adopted this story yet.
Rosa Mundi chapter 8 . 3/23/2013
Well, it was a great beginning. If you ever get back to it, I'll be very interested in seeing where you were going with Remus/Moony.
Rosa Mundi chapter 7 . 3/23/2013
Sooner or later, someone's going to hear "Uncle Remus" and laugh. (Probably stories they don't tell in Britain? Look for Br'er Rabbit on Wikipedia.). Remus Lupin does not look like an Uncle Remus. :D
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