Reviews for Tsubasa Randomness: Gear One
Irako of the Desert chapter 2 . 10/24/2009
Wow, way better than the first one! Is Kurogane going to be next? It should be the fact that he's really obsessed with sweets or something like that!
Irako of the Desert chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Oh, dear... Poor CloneYuko...

Very funny! I'd wonder what it would look like if it was drawn in manga format.

Wouldn't Yuko say "To give me beer is hitsuzen."?
Arin chapter 2 . 9/19/2009
waah. Brunette means brown hair.

ARiN chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
LOL what a coinky-dink. same day I read this I finalized my Higurashi and Tsubasa AMV.

Obsidian Buterfly chapter 2 . 5/2/2009
man do i love your stories or what? keep up the good job.

Aha! so i finally know why fay has blonde hair.
Raberba girl chapter 2 . 3/31/2009
Lol, Gabriella fan service...poor Chii. :)

I love this; “Fai-sama, you shouldn’t talk to the TV.” and "Kurogane from YOUR OWN ANIME?"

Not as random as the first chapter, and funnier.
Raberba girl chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Very random, but also funny.
ageofaquariusstudios chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
Hiya Hitsuzen-chan! I'm finally reviewing your story! It's awesome, but doesn't brunette mean brown haired? :)




Fai'swingedchronicles chapter 2 . 3/1/2009
I KNEW it wasnt natural XD

Lol that was funny! Fai knew kuro-pons name before he even knew Fai existed.
applepielover chapter 2 . 2/27/2009
That would be a good explanation as to why Fai is blonde when a lot of the other male CLAMP characters are brunettes.

This was also hilarious. I hope you'll do more files soon because you're doing a good job. XD


On the Dear Reader part, there should be a apostrophe mark instead of a quotation mark on isn't.

"…Desperate Housewivesis coming up next!” Housewives and is should be separated.

"...cried Chii, as she ran on the other room." I believe on should be to.

"Kurogane from YOUR OWN ANIME?" You're missing a quotation mark at the end.
applepielover chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Aha! I knew Fei Wong Reed is a pervert! That nasty pedo old man who happens to have a thing for Yuko!

This was hilarious. XD

Corrections (correct me if I'm wrong or if any is intentional):

"The women then had a fit of uncontrollable laughter." It's woman.

"He then pressed the button, and the Yuko clone opened it’s eyes." Its.

"...the Yuko clone asked, as it brushed of the dust of her velvet dress." Of (first one) should be off.

"Fei Wang Reed then went to his ‘Evil Refridgerator’ and took out a six-pack." It's refrigerator.
GreenAppleIce chapter 2 . 2/27/2009
(wheeze wheeze) Okay, calm down... (gets up from the floor) Wah, this was just as funny as the last one! Though I must say, this information is shocking, just shocking (shakes head) XD Can't wait until the next one!
ageofaquariusstudios chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Hellos! HEHEHE LOL! I like this story!

Fei Wang Reed: Pedofile... XD
Obsidian Buterfly chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
hahaha... this was really funny XD

pretty good so far. so is it like a oneshot or something?
GreenAppleIce chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
Ha ha, that was funny XD I really like the writing style for this- it's amusing :D Love this so far!