Reviews for Going Down?
SeattleBookworm chapter 3 . 4/20/2009
I love the way you ended the story! It was perfect

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devadasi7 chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
gemma! you rock!

srsly. that chapter perfection.

that is all.
AStoryReader chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
Yay! I really liked the added chapter you wrote! I was so excited to see that you had updated!

and I read, and I loved!

I'm just a sap for happy endings! How thoughtful of him to propose where it all went down. No pun intended. Thanks so much for sharing this with us!
Elizabeth223 chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
So cute! loved it!
Apomaro-Mellow chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
One word.

AMAZING!
HopeStreet chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
This is the perfect ending to your story. I loved it!
pippapear chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
GEMS!

Unforgivable - I forgot to review! :'(

I am so sorry. Truly I am.

I adore this piece. Loved your lion analogy throughout.

Her fears her concerns her worries, her passion and transformation under his breath, eyes and touch.

Gorgous piece beautifully written with resonancing (sp?) emotion throughout.

Your writing moves me in ways few can manage - ff or published.

Another gem from Gems.

Love you.

& thanks again.

Emmy.

X
Lucette212 chapter 3 . 4/18/2009
Gemma - what a great companion to Going Down?

I loved that the sex didn't happen immediately - there was still build up there; and I loved how Edward reassured Bella that despite the trappings he was still 'E'.

Loved the little epilogue too.

Congratulations on the win.
cruel-tobe-kind chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
oh, what a tease!
kcdancer chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
yum and more yum
Jessica Marie Cullen chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
That was truly an amazing story. I love every word in this story, (literally) and I wish it didn't have to end.

*sob*

J_M_C
kelseycjim chapter 3 . 4/17/2009
This was absolutely beautiful
Kerry chapter 3 . 4/16/2009
Awesome story. Very well written. I loved it!
gumibear26 chapter 3 . 4/16/2009
Love the continuation! Even if you don't write any more about this Bella and Edward, I will love yoiu. But, if ever they talk to you again, please feel free to share...
Shadowdragon13 chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
*pant*pant*pant*

That was totally wicked! I would love to see this continued. Absolutely fabulous the way this story played out.

More, please?
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